by KennelKing
Whether you like the plot or not, this is extremely well-written. Excellent length. Probably no hope for a second part, but who knows. One clear miss: how does he s__t? Mia should also benefit from his mouth and tongue.
Great start to this story. I figured Spot would get to eat Mia's pussy, after giving Brady a great BJ, oh well. So when are these to going put a chastity cage on him, with a shocker in that too????
Someone, or two someones, are going to get very badly hurt, if not killed. For what they have do to this man. Brainwashing and forced training does not last forever, unless the Victim loves the idea, forced in to their head. Such as joining the Marines. And the first time, some kind of way to get freedom, or revenge Presents itself, the mind will snap back in to Self preservation and act. No matter how Brutal that action is!!!!
He needs to take revenge, first chance he gets, maybe like kill them, after they took his life....
I still say that now that's he's A dog, he should act like a dog. And bite Master's cock off. After he forced him eat the cum from a BJ..
I don't understand ppl who make comments about wanting revenge or disliking the story. Go read a different genre.
This was great! A huge fantasy of mine and it was a good read