by remimercier
I like the storyline. Perhaps a bit more graphic details of the sexual events.
I would really like to hear the story of the newlyweds' capture and subsequent lives.
Keep up the good work!
Good start, could use a bit more background though. Would love to see a story of how this event came to be and the world to be explained and explored more. Reminds me of 36. Look up that story if you need advice. Trust me.