All Comments on 'My Sex Journey Pt. 02 - My Daughter'

I know you are trying to be descriptive, but words used that are also used to the describe some flows of menstrual cycle a few days per month, DO NOT belong here! They are not the best choice for image producers adjectives in any story that involves nakedness. "You bloody know it and saying nothing" and "SHIT. BLOODY SHIT. I forgot to lock the door." If a reader was, oh lets say SKIMMING the page (not that anyone ever would do something like that) and glanced at that descriptive comment about BLOODY anything mid page, they might avoid your read.

Then I put my sperm in my grown-up sperm. Grow up Buddy