All Comments on 'My Silence Will Cost You Ch. 06'

by LoganPrejean337

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MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFerabout 1 year ago

Don't tell anyone because I don't want to lose my nickname of Ice Queen, but this chapter had me misting up quite a number of times. First, with Sean's self-reproach and worry over Kyle, then that concern, friendship and help that Phillip and Max offered and finally with the talk Kyle and Sean had while coming to terms with their feelings. It's always easier for other people, in this case Max and Phillip, to see what's going on, rather than the ones it's happening to at the time. Thankfully though, being a master storyteller, you added enough touches of humor to lighten the mood and even left me laughing, visualizing Sean's father standing outside the bedroom door red faced. Poor guy! He probably just saw something he never wanted to see. Another great ***** chapter, thanks, M

nygayguynygayguyabout 1 year ago

Such a hot story, and such a nice ending! I actually want to know more of their story, but I'll happily take this. As you know from stories I've written, I do love when college roommates find their true selves and wind up with a "happily ever after." Seems like your boys have found it and are well on their way to a great life. Bravo!

LoganPrejean337LoganPrejean337about 1 year agoAuthor

@MarcLuciFer — Awww thanks so much! I have to let a bit of my humor pop through from time to time, even in difficult conversations and especially in awkward ones! Greatly appreciate your support and your reviews. Came to love both these flawed boys.

@NYGayGuy — awww thanks my friend. I knew the dark turns were jarring given my previous works but hoping this was the payoff you and others were hoping for, after all I am a big Ike softy after all! 😉

trappedinthecl0settrappedinthecl0setabout 1 year ago

Thanks for letting me be a part on this. We really had a ball working on this one, didn’t we?

Exluke1Exluke1about 1 year ago

Wow. I didn’t think you both could do it, but they not only forgave each other but they are in love now. I will admit to tearing up a couple times too, especially at the big turning point when Sean says he’s moving out tonight and Ky can’t believe Sean is so stupid if that’s what he thinks Kyle wants. Awesome raw fearful emotion from Kyle and the many ways he asked Sean for help makes Kyle such a likable guy and I think I have a crush on him now too! I sure think this story has lots of good possibilities for more drama to continue after your break and it sounds like you have another idea 💡 in the works to look forward to. Thank you again.

furluvrcafurluvrcaabout 1 year ago

I love how this turned out!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Please don’t end it here. There is still so much story to tell. Bet Sean parents are pretty cool with them as a couple, but how does Kyle come out - to his teammates, his friends, his parents? There is so much to still tell. I’m glad that the two of them worked through their issues - although it seemed kinda overly dramatic to then be worked completely through in a few hours of sitting in the rain. Kyle seemed to have already accepted his bi side (gay even) so the violent outburst, the cussing and name-calling, and the punch in the face all seemed a bit much. Please continue this tale or start another one about where they go from here.

SMCSheffreySMCSheffreyabout 1 year ago

Ugh. It ate my comment from this morning! i couldn't stay up for the download so changed my morning routine to read it instead. It is awesome. I loved how Kyle's reveal made everything make sense. Some stories try that same thing but don't make it fit the story like you did. I'd buy a Kindle version of this and the quarantine story. (Not the Donald one because I never want it to end)

I had hoped for more Kevin and Rick or find out which neighbor joins the club next in the Donald series but you gave me something I didn't even know I wanted to read instead. Can't wait to see what comes next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This was a really good story. I like the highs and lows and the fact that their outcome was not predictable. Their relationship could have gone either way, however, you had us guessing until the revelations came. I liked the euphoria of the billed up to Kyle getting fucked for the first time and the panic that set in after the cum settled; it shows how human they really are and how scary it is to fall in love let alone with a member of your own sex. You should continue working on their story, it has the potential of becoming something really big. Good luck. Ozz

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Nooo why’s it finished! That was so good, glad they finally communicated their feelings so beautiful!! Wish there was more 😭😭

Bhamguy3Bhamguy3about 1 year ago

Really hope this isnt the end!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A very interesting story in which you showed the struggle for love of Sean and Kayla and the struggle for your personality ... getting to know your neighbors as a couple of friends and even lovers. Great description of the situation where Kayl realizes she loves Sean and that Sean loves Kayla 👨‍❤️‍👨.

A beautiful description of the sex between Kayle and Sean.

I wonder how the parents will react when it turns out that Sean and Kayl are a couple in love with each other? I'm really looking forward to the next part of Sean and Kayla's story. Greetings from Poland, SissyBoy from Warsaw. 📝❤️

Bardzo interesująca historia w której ukazałeś walkę o miłość Sean i Kayla oraz walkę o swoją osobowość... poznanie się swoich sąsiadów jako para przyjaciół a nawet kochanków. Wspaniały opis sytuacji gdzie Kayl uświadamia sobie że kocha Seana i że Sean kocha Kayla 👨‍❤️‍👨. Piękny opis seksu pomiędzy Kaylem i Seanem.

Ciekawe jak zareagują rodzice gdy się wyda że Sean i Kayl to para zakochanych w sobie? Bardzo czekam na kolejną część historii Seana i Kayla.

Pozdrawiam z Polski, SissyBoy z Warszawy. 📝❤️

Karma1978Karma1978about 1 year ago

Love the series . Great story. But come on with ppl entering rooms with knocking or getting a response. Who does that, my son is almost and I make sure to knock and get an answer b/c ai don't want to see anything. Ppl can be changing etc. And it's late at night, if no answer then maybe they are asleep lol you would see him tomorrow so let's be real. And ppl lock the door 🤦🏾

badbluebadblue12 months ago

Very well written with fully fleshed characters whom we actually come to care about. Sex scenes are damn hot, too! 😉 I know the series ends with chapter six, but I hope you consider bringing back Sean and Kyle at some point for a future adventure together.

Willman33Willman3312 months ago

Thanks so for much for this story. Unbelievably hot, sexy and moving.

paul_curiouspaul_curious12 months ago

I know that all stories have to end but id have loved to see this continue.

Bluepoohstar08Bluepoohstar0811 months ago

Omg please continue this story!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Disappointing... wasted potential, and it started so good! So sad.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Anon 1 month ago,

Go get yourself checked out since you seem to be into blackmailing and all that shit. Really creepy, pal, not helping that you post a very unhelpful criticism either.

Be sad in your own room loving screwed up stuff.

Cane23Cane237 months ago

Great story, original plot. We start rooting for the Sean at the beginning. He is the one who tolerate Kyle's provocations and teasing. But, as story develops, Sean's revenge goes too far, hurting both of them. Becoming aware of their mistakes, accepting their feelings and Kyle accepting his sexuality leads to satisfying end of this story.

RobineaRobinea7 months ago

I thoroughly enjoyed the story. Very well structured and the way you bring out the emotions of apprehension, fear, anger and total acceptance really is quite masterful. What an accomplishment.

PrinceraPrincera6 months ago

Loved it wish there were more

LilBro2007LilBro20076 months ago

Great story Logan. Like many others have said, hope you will do another series / continue this story with Ky and Sean - if Ky comes out to his folks at Christmas and their reactions, what happens next semester between them, etc. Already read two other stories ... this was by far the best!

eros991133eros9911334 months ago

Please continue this series, very hot (and sweet at times) 🔥

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