All Comments on 'My Sister Blows Me in My Tent Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I waiting for tonight!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It's starting to get better with each chapter, but you need to write more than a page per chapter. It's to short and when it starts to get good it stops. So think about writing more than a page at a time.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyabout 2 years ago

5 Stars....I agree - this just keeps getting better.

rorr82rorr82about 2 years ago

Too short n stopped before anything good happened. Please make chapters longer n include more of the story not jus conversation

bshell47bshell47almost 2 years ago

Can’t wait for night.

Then comes the real fun.

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