All Comments on 'My Sister the Slave Girl: Ch. 02'

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Realdeal123Realdeal123about 2 years ago

Unless, he turn into Yandere, this is a generic cuckold story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

The brother character is in love with Eric not his sister. Define this story for what it really is and use the correct tags.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I like it and am looking forward to Ch. 3.

Turning502019Turning502019about 2 years ago

Interested in part 3.

UcntUcntabout 2 years ago

So fucking hot!! More please!!!

OneSilkyOneSilkyabout 2 years ago

Very nice. Now that Clara is under his spell, he should introduce her to a little brotherly anal n maybe some DP?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Do not listen to the naysayers - this is erotic literature at its very best in all aspects

Great pace, great setting, great theme....and wonderfully written which was a pleasure to read

Keep it up my friend...more please ..5 *****

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great read, but why didn’t Eric have brother come over and clean up her creampie for him??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

One of the best stories about the seduction of a virgin that I have ever read. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I agree other the other anonymous commenter, why didn’t Eric take complete control of the brother making him eat his sister’s creampie to an orgasm for complete humiliation, then let him to fuck her too, repeating the

Demand that he eat his cum..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please no cum eating for the brother. Yuck. Sister can do the eating, brother can do the watching. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

As someone has already said, this is one of the best stories about the seduction of a virgin that I have ever read. Kudos to you for such a hot and sexy read. Easily in the top five stories I have read on this site!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Extremely strong writing.

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