All Comments on 'My Sister Wants to Make Me Cum Ch. 05'

Great gets better

Great keeps getting better a bit of crossdressing would be nice

Clever premise.

But sex was all so mechanical. So ordinary.

Needed long, slow teasing of his cock and balls. Needed him to excited that he begged her to let him cum.

Needed her making him do things to/for her while she continued to play wth his cock.

Needed her giving him directions/instructions.

Three stars.

If he doesn't fuck her pussy in the next chapter I am done and will unfavorite. Past ridiculous.

He fucks her pussy in part 3!

Didn't really like this chapter 4 stars

Nice premise.

But sex is sooooo rushed.

Lacks details.

Lacks dialog during edging -- in particular -- about what was being done. How it felt to him, and to her. Whether he'd enjoy it more if she did something else/additional.

How close was he to cumming? Was he still able to control himself?

Did her asshole feel good? How good?

Three stars.

This gets better and better with every chapter.