All Comments on 'My Sister's a Werewolf!'

Out of all the stories in this series, I liked this one's characters the most. But hate cliffhangers. I hope you'll be writing a follow up!

Great story! Sister/Vampire has been the only one of the series that I didn’t really enjoy. For some reason as I was reading it, I really hated the way that Ellie was turning out to be more evil as the story progressed. So now in the pages of this story she begins to get her comeuppance and I like it. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this story. 5/5

I had a stroke trying to figure out who was who in the first chapter, you should clear that up better

GRRReat read, can't wait for the next chapter !!!!!

Why did you stop? This one needs to keep going

This part of the story was very good, but I can't stand stories that end in the middle and I have to wait until the writer decides to get back to it.

Cliffhangers do nothing but piss people off. Readers can feel the smirk of the author's amusement at the readers discomfort. Enjoyed the story but can only give it 3 stars for the cliffhanger.

@cooam6935 I know what you mean. The two brother-sister pairs being referred variously as him, her, he, she, his and her with little in the way of proper names for context. It took me a while to figure who was who.

Nitpicking aside, I really enjoyed this story in the My Sister's a ... series. I'm looking forward to part 2 with Blake's first outing as a wolf and the much anticipated pair bonding of the leaders of the new

good story, looking forward to more.

I hope the flurry of submissions means that you are feeling better! I also hope you plan to write a second part/conclusion to this piece! Wonderful work, as always.

Wonderful start

Hated it! He was just cool with everything

This is great, looking forward to part two.

Character personality's in these stories are so bitchy that I just end up hating everyone

Loved it and need Part 2!

Holly crap, love this! Please need more....desperately seeking part 2.

I was enjoying it, then you went and made the brother a werewolf. I’m sorry but that is an instant turn off for me.

There are precious few human male x werewolf female stories out there, and I was hoping this would be one them.

So I leave disappointed.

Please, when is part 2 coming? You promised us a part 2 at the start of this…. I really enjoyed this story and quite wait to read what happens next..

@Anonfirefighter - I'm afraid my health is somewhere between fucked and dying, at the moment. I am slowly trying to put some finishing touches on things and roll them out, but life and family have priority.

Great story and as much as I’m wanting a continuation I’m willing to wait till you’re all good. Take care and when all is well keep ‘em coming because you’re a great writer

Wait, so why was Scott Ellie’s slave? That part is confusing to me because they were a couple in their end. Did she do it accidentally? Although she kinda did talk down to him when she said to show her a reason to keep him around so I’m very confused because I love their story as well

@anon - Oh, Ellie's a monster. In "My Sister's a Vampire!", she kinda turns him into a thrall. It's not her fault. She is a vampire.

Take as long as you need, just makes us more excited when a continuation comes. As for him being a thrall…I’m so invested in your stories, read and reread them in order but can’t find where Ellie accidentally or purposely turns him into one. Like, at what time in the ‘My sister is a’ saga ,I would call it, does it happen?

@anon - It happens as part of "... Vampire!" During Scott and Ellie's climactic scene, Scott starts only repeating what Ellie tells him. The last four lines of the story are the most important, showing that it happened during the sex.

So finding out Wynne wasn't a Werewolf but actually a Skinwalker,and not just her but her brother Blake was too.But that Fucking Lesbian Bitch Cassie tried to steal Wynne away from Blake because she hated him with a passion for being such a major influence in Wynne's life.

And Cassie wanted to turn Wynne into her sexslave and get her to disown her brother Blake,but Surprise! Lily the Witch opened both Blake and Wynne's eyes by revealing they both were Skinwalkers,and Cassie had nothing to do with turning Wynne since she already was one.So Wynne wasn't endebted to Cassie,so Wynne reverted back to her love and adoration to her brother Blake.

Honestly if I were Blake I would go confront Cassie to keep her Skanky Werewolf Lesbian Ass away from Wynne,and tell her if she tries that Blake will rip her head off and shit down her Lesbian Neck and for good measure have Blake wolf out in front of her and get in her face and snap at her menacingly to get the point across.

I'll pray for your well being!!🙏🏻🙏🏻

You said this was a 2 part story where is the ending plus this is a non erotica story since there was no actual sex involved either way this story and my sister is a vampire is way better than my sister is a ghost but in regards to ellie in this story you made her weaker then you did in her actual story which makes no since for in her story you stated she was a hybrid which gives her the strength of both werewolf and vampire which makes her stronger and more powerful than the others that is either wolf or vampire alone other than mistake like I said it was a decent story

My guy, where is the next chapter😭 I’ve been away from this story for so long to give it time to be here and I just came back and nothing😭😭😭😭

This can't be all. It is a great story and set up perfectly for another chapter or more.

I too look forward to the rest of the story! This is one of the mid-tier of these stories. "Witch" is good and gives the background while "Ghost" is superb!

"Zombie" isn't my cuppa, but that's my taste more than your writing.