All Comments on 'My Sister's Best Friend'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percy3 months ago

A fortuitous accident!

5

ArdieffArdieff3 months ago

Sappy - but in a nice way ;-)

boatbummboatbumm3 months ago
Not Sure Why...

...Big sister's BFF would be off-limits?

But then, I don't have a big sister. ;-)

Cute story, thanks!

LudvigBlomSELudvigBlomSE3 months ago

Nice! It left a smile on my face. 5*

afosi2604afosi26043 months ago

Brief and to the point. Good story. 5*

inka2222inka22223 months ago

Who cares if it was sappy? Both people are happy, all that matters.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

@boatbumm because if it doesnt work out and they break up you end up have choosing between your best friend and your sibling.

Truly great 750. 5*

Db4554Db45543 months ago

Very nice story, but what’s taboo about your sister’s best friend?

Prospecting_for_snowProspecting_for_snow3 months ago

Creating a story that conveys emotion in just 750 words is difficult. Fine job

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Too short and low detail

Dalton402Dalton4023 months agoAuthor

@Anonymous, it literally says at the beginning that it was for the 750 word project so 750 words is all you're going to get.

WhoGivesAShitWhoGivesAShit3 months ago

Never really understood why the sister has issues with her brother being with her friend. It’s kind of stupid. You grow up in a neighborhood, both siblings have friends all close in age. It’s inevitable that some in the group gravitate towards each other. I guess women don’t want their friends talking about sex with their brother… so don’t talk about sex. Oh wait! That’s too logical.

rbloch66rbloch663 months ago

Sister should be happy that best friend is part of the family now.

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