All Comments on 'My Sister's Friend'

I’m not a grammar nazi but you need to use spellcheck or find an editor.

The story hung together well but the constant errors were annoying, good first effort

I like the switching of perspektives. Thank you for your work.

A few mistakes here and there, but otherwise, it was a very fun read! As for an editor, just re-read it before submitting it. You'd be surprised how often people change names to protect the innocent, then let the real name slip in by accident. Most of the errors were easy to catch and could be corrected before submitting next time.

I wrote something like this with an ex-girlfriend, but we didn't put in the perspective changes and it got rejected; I had given it to her for her first submission, so I will have to send your story to her and see if she wants to edit ours and resubmit it. 5/5

That was great!! Please continue.

Story was good . Some people are so critical , like they are perfect...AL

💕 loved this 💕

Make George a sexy young man and give him a bit of chest hair -- something for her to touch and play with besides his big cock!