All Comments on 'My Sister's Sweet Cunt'

Good premise.

Meh story.

Sex is all very rushed.

Needed to slow down.

Needed to have her force him tell her what he thinks about while he's masturbating with her panties.

Needed to have her offer to let him smell her pussy before licking it.

Two stars.

She calls him small, but he's probably the biggest the slut has ever touched. She just derides him to keep him compliant.

I expect that when he eventually figures it out, he'll take his wicked sister again, and again, and again. He'll fuck her whenever he wants, and eventually breed the bitch.

And she'll love him for it.

Rushed

This has a lot of promise, please take the advice of the others who have commented and slow the pace of the story. I love the use of the word cunt rather than pussy.