All Comments on 'My Slave's Birthday Gift Ch. 01'

you could give your slave is a divorce and pay for some therapy. That way he can hopefully recover and live a better live with a decent woman who respects him.

Nice job. I can't wait to read more.

Outstanding torture for your slave and no release. He still had his cockring on when he was finally allowed to cum. It had to hurt big time since he had it on for quite some time and having his cum shoot out with such force even with the ring on had to be painful. I wonder how long she left him before taking him back to their room for more playtime. Hot stuff and maybe a sequel?

As a sub, I really enjoyed reading this story. I'm sorry that someone who didn't realize you're writing fiction chose to comment so negatively, but I think you have a great gift and hope you write lots more.

Seems you could benefit from a class in English Grammar and a good spanking.

Honey, if you are reading this, I want to go there on my birthday.

what "treats" your beloved slave gets when it isn't his birthday. Poor sod.

Delicious. And what a way to love your subbie.

The golden rule isn’t to “do unto others as you would have them do unto you”, but “do unto others as they like to be done by”.

I wonder why pious gutless anons read BDSM fiction only to be “outraged” and write derogatory comments. Or are they misogynists? Threatened by a strong woman in charge?

Nicely done. An enjoyable read. Thanks. JQGraves

Loved your story. The only part I didn’t like is making him jerk himself off. Much better if his mistress does it. I’m not one that likes to masturbate when there are a woman’s hands available. Thank you for your story and don’t let the irrelevant negative comments deter you.