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Eventually, we made it to the peak. I explained that I had taken a tumble and that's why my fault looked so scratched up. Thankfully, the tears were gone by then. Eventually, we headed down. A much easier path this time and soon enough we were back in the parking lot. We all said our goodbyes and she actually asked for my number. I had wanted to ask her but she beat me to it. She didn't even ask in a way that was super inviting. Or that I might say no. Simply a matter of fact that I was going to give her my number and that I would then patiently wait for her message.
I think it was a good day. I had conquered the mountain. I wish I could follow that up and say that she had conquered me. That'd sound nice. But that would be my ego speaking. I wasn't something to conquer: I was too weak for that. For her, I was something to be taken...and she had.
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Thank you for reading and please rate and comment.
I have a desire to continue this and probably will but curious if you'd like to see more of this relationship. And of course, Scarlet. And please do let me know if you think I did a good job on describing her. I had a specific woman in mind when writing Scarlet and she is muscular and strong but I didn't want to frame her as some behemoth that is comparable to a female bodybuilder or even an "Amazonian" woman. Instead, she is genuinely just strong and large and thoroughly impressive and natural. I have no issues with a mixture of strong masculine traits in a woman but I was trying to ensure that my description of her maintained strong femininity. Just with the amazing features that this real woman has of being so strong and fierce and beautiful.
Thanks!
- COMMENTS
sm1982about 2 months agoI had randomly found this story under nonconsent and up to the halfway point in the hike, couldn’t guess who the narrator was (male/female) lol it was only confirmed when Scarlett told Nick she would watch over “him”. I then headed to the end to read the tags. Change how I saw the narrator and how I was reading this story. Anyway, it was a great concept and definitely a unique hiking one.
Peterhu1486 months agoThis was really enjoyable. Well written and developed. As you said, it's not all about sex but sometimes the interplay of characters and the circumstances they find themselves in. I would definitely like to read more of this and see the relationship develop further please.
