by alfredo_baby
Im loving this story very enticing and I cant wait to read what happens next very sexy and very exciting
The story started out great......then you let the Son dictate the Mothers actions. That's unacceptable.
In a story or real life.
Your writing is very good. However three chapters of build up is getting almost as frustrating for the reader as it is for the main character Lou. Perhaps this series should be in Erotic Couplings instead of incest, as it seems mom and son are never gonna fuck.