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All Comments on 'My Stepdad's Desire Pt. 01'

by ManuelJack

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
unusually good writing

writing is bizarrely good. needs a re-edit or two to get rid of extraneous sentences (when they arrive home, last sentence redundant, for e.g). you have a cinematic writing style. can well imagine this filmed

RobJasperRobJasperover 3 years ago
Lustful story!

Lustful story with some new twists! Can't wait to see where it goes!

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