by kevinnash
Hmmmm what a hot sexy story. I hope there’s going to be another chapter. The story was well written and flowed very nice. Have to give you 10 stars…
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Good premise.
But much too short. And too rushed.
Needed a great deal more preliminaries before proceeding to a quick handjob and him cumming. Extended teasing needed. Involvement of more than her hand needed.
Three stars.
Any hair on big brother's chest that stepsister could stroke and maybe taste? The pool rater would plaster the hair to his chest -- either way a sexy sight!
Nice! Short, hot, and sweet!
The story could be expanded, but even if it is not, it is still a hot, sexy, slice of life. Good job!
anyone that's ever *actually* had sex in a swimming pool, or a hand job for that matter, would know the water, especially in a chlorinated pool is a recipe for disaster. it's not a lubricant, pretty much the opposite, washing away and natural juices for the woman, and making a hand job extremely painful. Only a virgin, or someone who's never even fooled around in a pool, would believe this even remotely possible.
To the pool water = no lubrication therefore the author must be a virgin critic... Not if the cock being stroked in the pool is uncircumcised. I have had several hand jobs in a pool successfully with my uncut cock. And as a father of 5... I'm certainly no virgin.