All Comments on 'My Story about Cuckolding'

by Dragan25n

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Anonymousalmost 6 years ago

i loved it

a little hard to understand but i liked u punching his nuts and shooting him.

Anonymousalmost 6 years ago

Unreadable

Sorry, your writing needs a lot of help. Maybe school?? The first couple of paragraphs were just ok then everything went off the rails. Assume English is not your first language. Agree with previous poster, especially punching his nuts and shooting him. To bad you didn't blow his balls off. A castrated bull. LOLOLOLOL. My thinking is that most males would follow this action. So thanks for writing that. Good luck.

Anonymousalmost 5 years ago

I gave you a 3+ [🌟🌟🌟+ (3.4/5 = 68%)]! The storyline was well conceived, but it was not well crafted. There is room for improvement! Keep writing & keep posting.

Perhaps you are overusing dialogues.

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