by dominanceaddict1
Hi all. I’ve submitted a request to change the title to “Day 06.” Apologies for any confusion this may have caused.
i have such a CRUSH on your Ryan stories... i can't wait to read what cums next!
I am loving this series, has me waiting for the next chapter (which I hope there is one) to see what happens with Tammy Ryan and Tracy. This author is one hot erotic writer, keep it up
Yes DAY 6 hope no one thinks this is a prequel! Its actually day 6 hope the request goes through.
I noticed the page 4 glitch too. Ill ask about it but it may take them a couple days for the fix
All,
Apologies for the title error and page 4 glitch. I submitted a request to fix both more than 4 days ago but no response yet. Usual turnaround time is 2 days. If any comment moderator sees this please look into this for me.
If anyone else knows a way to get in touch with admins to make these fixes other than the “new story edit” submission, please let me know.
Thanks
So I discovered that if you’re on a device that is able to do vertical orientation (e.g., iPhone, ipad), then page 4 can be read. It flashes for horizontal orientation in a manner that renders it impossible to read.
I’ve submitted a number of bug reports but no response yet.
Every series and one shot you've written so far has been incredible... Please keep writing, for as long as you feel the inspiration.
Please please update this as soon as possible and also can you give an update like everyday..trust me you are the first author and your story is the first one I added to my favorites ..you are too good ..the story is just perfect ..what will happen next ..so far he cares tammy above everyone..will this continue even after fucking tracy..
I was expecting another installment in this series, but I guess none is coming. Was hoping to see Tammy in full housewife mode, wearing makeup, a pretty dress and heels while cooking for Ryan, and then changing into sexy lingerie for bedtime action.
FANTASTIC! would love to see the Tammy and Tracy together with Ryan. I hope you write the next chapter soon so I can as hot as I got reading these chapters.
Terrific. You are a terrific writer. I hope you continue the story with Tammy and Tracy together with Ryan. That would be a terrific read. I'm hard just thinking about Ryan taking both of them together at the same time. I'll keep my fingers crossed with anticipation of chapter 7.
OMG your stories are amazing. I feel hynotized by them. Can't stop reading sooo hot.
Although the writing is good and interesting. It seems to be that , at times, the story reads more like science fiction or mind control or chronicled delusions by the main character , or multiple personalities. I mean, the instinct normally would have been for this guy to cover his lower parts when caught but you see him cover top and bottom. The interaction with his own daughter ... No, not credible. It is just very unlikely psychologically. But keep writing.
I don't think the middle of a crowd dance floor is the best place for their first time, is my only criticism. But its your story and I really enjoy it.