All Comments on 'My Television Pt. 02 - The Next Day'

It was very difficult to read because of all the misspelling and added words. In my mind there is no excuse for either. Hopefully you will do better next time.

Does anybody else think this too?

Are you a volunteer proofreader?

A lot of spelling errors but the sheer eroticism more than made up for it. Always awesome to see a straight white boy go gay for big black cock. Great story. More like this please.