All Comments on 'My Threesome'

I would probably not have even bothered if you had indicated this was an fmf (or ffm) 3some - I usually don't.

A story written in the first person is amateurish enough, but your constant changing between the first person ("I") and the third person ("she") makes the story virtually unreadable. If you want to write in English, learn the rules of grammar, please!

Thanks for a good tale. Now Jim needs her and a Girlfriend.