All Comments on 'My Transformation into a Shemale Ch. 01'

not good at all

Good start. Awaiting next chapter.

You have the beginning of what could be good series, but please proof read it before the next chapter - it was a little choppy.

Sounds like one of his beers was laced with Roofies to trick him into compliance.

You need an editor in the worst way!

Chapter ends with nothing. Should have continued. Editing needs help as well.