All Comments on 'My Transformation into a Shemale Ch. 02'

This so boring, can't you write more than a few 100 words. Give it up and find a new hobby.

I am not a writing expert nor a sentence structure Nazi , but wow ! Have you not learned about conjunctions and participles ? Interesting story concept . Seems more like a Reluctance and Non-Consent category ? In any case , best of luck with subsequent chapters .

very very bad

keep writing. I think its up to us readers what we like

Wonderful first chapter

I am enjoying this story and wait each day to read the next instalment

This, and the previous "chapter", in reality make up an interesting opening to what ever story you are attempting to write. Personally; I think, that from your opening with the Pub/Bar scene, until the hero greets the guests as they arrive, should have been published as one(1) chapter. The "Party" and the hero's emersion into a "Transgender/shemale" persona should be published as a separate chapter. Please, as you write, wait until you have at least 8 to 10 pages on whatever publishing software you're using before uploading, so far, what I've read, is barely titillating.

When are you going to write part 3? I gave 5 stars on this story and waiting for the next chapter. I myself like the short chapters.

Love to read part 3, can't wait

need part three cause you got me going then cum to find out no part 3 aww man kinda disappointed bummed out and let down ... and I"m not meaning anything in any kind of neg way or bad way just really expected to go on to part three sorry if I didn't rate this .... I will in time after reading part three ...

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Your story has me hot and bothered. I need more!

Way too short of a story!

Where's part 3??!

Dude, don’t you finish your series??