All Comments on 'My VC Domme (Pt. 01)'

by Primus1

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maxout09maxout0910 months ago

Excellent writing. I loved the way to created an image of your story. I was easily able to create a picture in my mind and you allowed the story to develop quickly without over-explaining. Cannot wait for more.

redlion75redlion7510 months ago

Cheating bitch plain and simple.

Aoife_from_UlsterAoife_from_Ulster10 months ago

A wonderful little start. I enjoy how you drew her in and sprung the trap. I would have anticipated a bit more resistance and push back. I anticipated the next chapters wondering where this all leads.

A good story🌟🌟🌟🌟

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