All Comments on 'My Virgin Sister'

i get off every page XD

THE BEST SHIT EVER

soooooooo fucking hot........i had a hard on all d time........dis was fuckinf gr8........best ever......keep writing

I had my dick in my hand the whole time!!!!!!

loved every bit of it.

I played with my pussy for 3 hours during and after reading that! H O T!

Like a fine piece of classical music, with balance, grace and refinement.

Never have I cummed so hard from a story--and I didn't even make it through half of it. I'll have to continue it later on.

Very well written.

Amazing! While it really starts innocently, it continues and eventually evolves into a really interesting sexual adventure of a guy, who just wants to live his fantasies.

And while reading it, I lived mine :P Very good.

That story was absolutely amazing!!!

The dialogue was a bit awkward at times, but the descriptions were terrific, and that's what we're really here for. Lots of fun.

all thing considered, IT WAS HOT AS HELL! Thanks for a great incest tale.

that was pretty fucking sexyyy. i never thought this incest thing would do anything to me but i had like 20 orgasms reading that.

i loved your story. it was very well written.

That was actually really amazing! I never thought about the incest thing, and then my bf told me to read it and the stuff they were doing, God i wish I could of done them lol, really amazingly written!!! :D

DUDE KEEP ON WRITING THIS IS THE BEST STORY I READ YET

do another part to this

Ok man, this was better than watching porn. I cummed 6 times the first time I read it.

For those of you who have a sex life with someone, read it with her. My chick got wet on the first page then we fucked while reading this. It was the best sex I have had in a long time and we tried almost everything that was described. Samslam, you should be a fucking porn book writer!

keep on writing dude! this was a very good one! i love it!

I've read a lot of stories on this site and on others, and I'm not sure I've ever read one that stayed this hot, this long! Your descriptions were amazing. The story line, while a little improbable, was so excellently done that it quickly made no difference. I'm sure that stuff like this does actually happen, although, sadly, it didn't happen to me. But wow! What a lucky guy! The slow build-up to actually fucking his sister was delicious. The sexual tension between them, both before and after he actually took her cherry was almost more than I could handle. I'll tell you one thing -- before I try to read this one again, I'm going to OD on Viagra so I can just stroke it from the first word to the last. This story is going to get recommended to ALL my friends!

A few mistakes but that's to be expected for a 9 page story. It was so fucking hot though, I couldn't wait for the threesome.

wowsers, i just made a mess in my trousers:D

wow wonderful family and so lucky that all worked out.

haha

too bad my sister piss's me off. im not into my own family but i like getting a hard-on reading people's stories. And masturbating.

Oh, man, you wrote a whopper of a story. It was great. I've had a girlfriend in my parent's pool, but nothing much really happened. This completes the pool fantasy by far. Thanks, and keep up the GREAT work. Maybe something with a girlfriend (MFF) or boyfriend (MMF) or both (MMFF)? Thanks again for all the hot images.

i like that story alot you should make dd come home and have sex with family too.

I came atleast 10 times reading this! I stayed up to 4 am reading, now im only gonna get like 5 hours of steep but it was fucking worth it.

Man this was the best story i ever read, my cock was hard and horny constantly, came bout 7times, well done

I am now late for work after reading this straight through. It's great to be the boss. I was constantly hard for 3 hours. Wonderful story. Keep up the good work!

It was a great story but 9pgs was a little too long for my liking

one of the longest, most stimulating bits I have ever read. If I get 20 minutes of sleep this morning, I'll be lucky, but FUCK it was worth it. You made it long, but still managed to keep it burning throughout the whole story.

fucking AWESOME story!

absolute great story i was hard whole time took me 3 times at my computer to read in full i wish i could fuck my sister as well shes something else

Amazing story! x

This is fucking amazing!!

I wish my step-brother would fuck me like that!! but my step-dad does a pretty good job.. I feel so Horny right now, thankyou so mucch (;

xx

I read the first few paragraphs, and quickly lost interest.

best story ever and my girlfriend thought so too

woa! that is amazing! I was hard for hours and the story was simulating the whole way through, well done

I've never read a hotter story before, im so freaking hard!

Best story I ever red, it kept me hard right until the end.

this story was fucking amazing

Amazing story! I could not stop until I was done with all nine parts!And I hate long drawn out stories, that normally lead to no where.Truely a must read!

The story is told in a better way. It seems natural. the way first fuck has been told it is my experience with my girl friend. She never cryed but took the tool slowly and happily.She was not horny and wild but like Lisa gentle and always ready to be fucked.Lisa is realy a great fucking slut.It is godd to read about her blowjob which may be emaginary.

This is an amazing story, well written and I really liked it.

Very well written.. coherent and believable. One of the hottest stories I have read in a long time. Thank you, please keep up the good work and write more like this one.

This inspired me to confess my feelings for my sister and she ended up sucking my cock!

ive fantasized about fucking my sister for a long time and i masturbate about her everyday. i decided to confess after reading this story and she says she has like me 2. we ended up fucking each other every day after that. and she even broke up with her boyfriend for me. =) thank you very much.

Thanks u for this story , it was really so good

it was really good until you had taken it too far about the time of the tied up thing, and expecially with the mom.. other then that i liked it

Nice story! Thanks for posting it!

u r de man.................superb story....i'm still jerkin off after reading ..............keep it up...

i loved it!!!!!!

i so want to fuckk after reading this. but i am still a virgin. so i am going to wait for "THE ONE"

omg this story was fucking awesome i fucked my sister after i read this it was fucking awesome

The story speaks for itself - excellent! You do what the vast majority of so-called erotic "writers" do not do, and that is write well, and write a story that is believable. You take the time to build the story and make it realistic. For example, most "writers" would give Lisa 42DD hooters or something outrageously stupid like that. Then they would have Lisa and Jack screwing within two minutes. The pretext and context would suck. That is the way garbage is written.

You on the other hand provide a realistic context, believable characters (the 8 inch cock was a bit much, average would have been better, but the way you wrote Lisa's reaction to it is tender and responsive in a discovering sort of way), with personalities and real bodies. Good job on writing, grammar, spelling - how refreshing. One last thing, you provide for and allow the intimacy between Lisa and Jack to build naturally. A great job.

i hate to read... but this kept me addicted! love wat u did here.. very creative and if it isnt real it certainly sounds like u experienced this!

I've read a lot of porn stories but this is differnt.fekin amazing:)

This was one pretty fucking hot story.

I mean, I thought it was just a one-shot type of thing and I was actually surprised to find this had nine chapters. It was pretty interesting and it turned me the hell on.

Great job!

Arguably one of the best stories ever posted on literotica, this story from start to finish was incredible, the vivid detail made this story.

i read this twice and i hate, and i mean HATE!!!!!, reading but this was like i said F-U-C-K-I-N-G A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!, thank now make it into a video pls

Holy shit, this story had me ready to cum almost immediately after I began reading it. Wouldn't it be great if you were to continue it....maybe by bringing the father into the group so that the daughter could to teach him how to control his ejaculations. He could be watching his son fucking his wife while he's fucking his daughter...??? Just an idea

Poor old Dad was pretty much left out of the action in this story. Otherwise, the other three members of the family made up for it with enough sex for six people, though. Wow, they even got dear old Mom involved. Hot story.

This mini-novel was SEXtacular! got me so into the story, while it made me jerk myself without even knowing. I fucking had so much jizz build up, i needed a bucket. Please make more vivid and detailed stories like this.Loved it so much. Hope there's a sequel.

It was incredibly hard holding back while reading this. Even though the story is so crazy, its so perfectly written that it is believable. No cheesy dialogue almost at all.

You should let the father see how u guys fucked and he would join u.

lol i usually only read lez stories or watch lez/solo porn but this was a better read with a dude in it than 3 chicks i reckon coz u sorta become the dude u know but jesus fucking christ i'd hate to see what it'd be like when the gandparents pop over for a visit #shudders#

SAM, iS THERE ANYTHiNG Y0U CANT D0?

SUCH A FUCKiN H0T ST0RY!!!!! L0VED iT FR0M BEGiNNiNG T0 END!!! Y0UR ST0RiES ACTUALLY MAKE ME THiNK 0F WAT FAMiLY SEX MiGHT ACTUALLY FEEL LiKE...

GREAT ViViD iMAGES!!! i REALLY WANT T0 TRY THE HARNES THiNG N0W!!!

L0L

Awesome.

Quite realistic and resonable interaction (by speach and acting)

between the chars. Sensual *going forward*.

I enjoyed it very much. Thank you.

me and my sister have been doing it for years and every day gets better my cousin has joined in several times aswell but she always ends up making me suck my own dick my juices taste nice aswell but would love to taste my mums all i have done with her is had a handjob and a blowjob she was sensationable i must say if only my family would do a video i have tried making one but its not the same and i had people questioning me about she was not my sister or cousin so yeh all the best keep fucking her man from the sisterfucker.com

dude your so lucky that u get to do this, i sat here to read the whole thing cause it was just that awesome. dude ur fucking amazing!

why would you fuck your mom and sister?

good story, funny at times... not so pleased with the mother aspect but.... well lets put it this way if i had a twin sister i'd try to do her.... with the subtlety of a stampede

this was a gooooood story and i found myself masturbating just reading sooo fuckn hot

that turnd me on soooo much that I had to fuc

k after that

That was an absolutley amazing story. It made me cum 4 times, other stories only once. Great-job man.

This story is one of the best I have read, and I have read many, believe me.

The long prelude to the sex act with the sister, then the different variations of positions, etc was very good, and then you topped it off with a sensual mother masturbating and then admitting that she had noticed her children playing around and teasing her. Very, very good, keep it up, mmmm

Di

somehow forced myself to make it through the whole story (with much dificulty mind you) and timed one of my best orgasams right at the end. im a dribbler usualy, but i practicaly shot into the sealing fan

Absolutely loved it, couldn't stop reading. I tried to make it without masturbating but it was so hard at the end..! please write more stories like this (bet you got horny just writing it)

Absalutly amazing.

I dropped about 10 loads reading this. KEEP MAKIN STORIES!

fuck that was the best story ive read in a long time, keep up the good work

Having sex with your sister is one thing, but with your mom?? Common. BTW very good storie I ended up beating my meat after it.

dude this was the best story ive read in i dont know how long nice job

it took me bits and pieces a day i read this for a week. i hope theres a sequel because this is the best storie i ever read gave me about 30 orgasms in a week

Amazing! Better than any other story/Vid/anything else! Keep writing! Make a movie lol

God damn, I am very impressed.

after i read this i had to go masturbate in the shower.

mm. at least 4 orgasms.

You are an amazing author. PLEASE keep writing

Hey nice etory a couple of pics would of been nice

this something i would read everyday its highly entertaining and makes me wanna experiment with my sister & mom

The only sad part of the story was sending them to USC! Everything else was fun and no doubt delicious. Thank you.

This was the best story ive ever read! Luv it! Man i wish my bro and mom were that ahmazingg!!!!!

you are a very talented author i truly enjoyed this story, the worst part about it was that it had to end. thank you for entertaining my morning and please continue writing

This was great I read it in 2 hours if I had a cock to beat, Id do just that. Keep it up! :D

At first i thought this would be a load of crapp like me previous encounters, but as I continued reading it was worth it in the end i luv this story <3 maybe sumtime in the near future you can make it into a video.

i shot off like 3 loads man that was epic i would love to fuck my sister

wow iv been doin the same thing to my sis spying on her i would love to fuck her lol but awsome story i hate reading but loved this one so much i skiped dinner!!! loved it keep writing

i read all ur stories this one is mii fav

i hope u make another lyk this one

I really loved your story! Well him fucking his sister! I just wish that he would of licked his sister's asshole, and fucked her in the ass, that would of been awsome! Anyways, I really loved your story, except the MoM part. I thought that you really made it believable! Thanks again! I can't wait to read some more of your stories, while I jerk off thinking about my hot little sister!

you killed it on page three when he had her tied to the bed and kept teasing her no girl would put up with it she would get pissed and when she got free tell him he was never touching her againand that if he tried she would tell thier father keep it atleast sounding realistic this should have been in the fantasy area

Great story, great characters, great action - very hot! My only problem is my frustration with Jack. How is it possible to have two such perfect women at your disposal and never get around to tonguing their delicious asses???

This story was absolutely dick pounding, I must have stopped to jack off 2-3 times each page! I love your discription of the sister and I really had fun reading when you wrote about teasing the mom! Jack sounded like such a believable character and I wish I was as lucky as him!

just absolutely amazing stuff i can't wait to check out your other stories

whoever the person is that believes that no woman would want to be tied up and teased until every erogenous zone in thier body felt like it was going to explode in a tidal wave of orgasmic pleasure has completely blocked out the fact that there are entire communities of people that like to be tied up and teased. it would defeat the purpose of teasing if the victim of said teasing could get what they wanted just by begging .she asked to be tied up so she knew what she was getting into. i don't know about the person that wrote that comment but if you've ever been brought to the brink of orgasm repetitively until it was almost painful then been allowed to release you will know that most people are anything but pissed afterward . and if you think that a girl would throw away not only the bond of brother and sister but also that of lovers because she didn't get what she wanted when she wanted it then that girl deserves to get her ass beat. that guy would be exiled from his family after the girl told thier father and just because her orgasm didnt come when she wanted it to... wow if thats what realistic is then fuck reality ....the sad thing is that yes there are women that would do that and those are the same kind of women that would say that someone raped them because they decided to break up with them. but there are also decent people that would just say after the hand cuffs came off that they needed to make a safe word that if said means means to finish it

It made me wait to read what happens next