All Comments on 'My Virgin Sister'

And they call themselves...the Aristocrats.

The best story I've read on the net.

This is a fun, if a bit goofy story. Typical of this story is that 1) all the participants are good looking with great bodies, no matter their age, 2) they find themselves in the most amazing situations that can only be resolved by having sex with each other and 3) just when you thought it couldn't get any better, or more over-the-top, depending on your point of view, it does. I especially love the part where Mom demands anal sex from her son, without a prior enema. Not to worry though, this a day in the life of the porn family!

On a more serious note, this a fun, well-written story that revels in it's mundane, run-of-the-mill plot, which is as it should be.

I loved this sex story!!

While i read the sexual parts I rubbed my pussy.

I loved this book!! My fav ever!! Oooh I wud just want to rubb

her and just lick her pussy clean!

i cumed so hard when i read this!!!!!!!! i loved this story!!!!!!!

First one I read took me 3days because the kids would be around and i did not want them to see my hard on lol but grate story

It took me 2 days too read this!! :P Because I have room mates who always need my computer!! I love it I always cum!! I love masturbating to this story!! mmmmmm

I liked the part with your sister, but with your mother...That was taking it too far. Oh, how disappointed I am.

i have never cummed soo hard....i cummed abt 10 times just rteading it..i am so jelous of jack!!!!

That had to be the best one I've read in here yet.... Sure makes me wish I had a Sister and Mother. None of us would ever see the light of day again. WOW!

This has to be one of he best stories I've ever read took a few hours for me but I felt feverish all the way throughmy only regret is not being able to be in a place I could stroke the massive raging hard on I have but damn I'm streaming unbelievable amounts of Pre cum.. More than thank you!!!

That was an incredibly well-written and erotic story. Loved every minute of it. You are going in my faves. ^.-

I was Cum all the way though it!!!!! Reminds me of what I none. My Boyfriend is gone!!! He has no idea what I'm been doin!!!! SHH!!!!

Thanks ;) lol

It had me reading it, thoroughly! It brought back so many memories of my little sister and I. It was so similar I had a we dream and called my sister the next day to read it. She is not my twin, but step-siblings. I did not move in with them until I was 15. So I walked into hive of horniness when I fell asleep the first night. AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!! Thank you.

Absofuckinglutely Awesome story. Made me cum several times during the reading of it. Totally unrealistic in my life, but extremely entertaining & erotic.

Quite morally challenging for a good christian boy. Would also make a great film, especially for those of us with limited literary knowledge. I thought it had a nice happy ending as well. I kept expecting them to get busted all the time. I will quite happily go and snuggle up to the wife now but must decide whether to show her this story or not.

Thankyou Sam, Thankyou Samislam.

Omfg, this is my fantasy come to life. Brought me to orgasm so many times including just now when I finished it. In my fantasy I would be Lisa, but other than that this is like my perfect story, love it!!! Perhaps I should try to seduce my brother, who knows!? Might work! =P

This is the best thing i have ever read, It took me and my girlfriend 3 days to finish reading it just because we kept trying new ideas that this gave us, Its really spiced up our sex life and now she always stops me from cumming -_- lol

I makes me want to finger my self

Dam this is the best story I've read!! Excitement from middle to end!! Just great! Hope to read more!!! Keep it up!!!!!!!

How did she not get preggers? he came inside her everyday it sounds like.. even if she were on birth control, that much jizz is bound to get her preggers.

the only thing i got from my sister is a handjob not even a full blowjob but he got everything and more lucky kid i wana meet these two so badly if there both real

Just read this for the second time ... it's my favorite piece of writing here. My compliments to the author.

Why the fuck do you abbreviate that?

Anyway, great story.

My sister and I used to fuck pretty much daily but we never involved mom or our big sister

Me and my Girlfriend both read this, (while we were virgins) and I have to admit this story gave me a major hard on. After we read your story about 30 minutes later we were no longer virgins. This is my third time reading this and it is amazing! Me and my Girlfriend are still together and still fucking and trying new things. Thanks for the amazing story, hoping for a new and better one!!

>:D

Nice story and good details. I like the way you make this story interesting. Keep it up and hope to read more stories!!

This is the best thing I have read in ages it gave me such a hard on I ask my sister If I could try licking her out but sue said no but I'll ask again but put some pics up cause I have a great imagination of what your mom and SOS look like but I want to see it for real and also you sister sounds like a really good fuck great story

Loved the story from start to finish, and I know it's just that, a story but you did portray the sister as a totally innocent and untouched virgin, so why hasn't she got pregnant? Was she on "The Pill" for period control or did she decide to go on it once she decided to let Tony fuck her, or is she just playing "Russian Roulette". this is not a criticism, just interested to know how this fits into the actual story. So thanks very much.

ooooh dam,,,this is a hot story,,,enjoyed jacks narration and lisa's enthusiasm and her hot talk!! mom was a nice addition,,,did not think that was a part of the story but when hints were dropped i was immediately excited,,,,thank you for a good read! i love good smut!

love u sis for this mother fuckin.!

Not a bad story, but tooooo long. 2-3 pages would have been enough

I was expecting a 2 or 3 page story but this went beond that and I actually didnt mind it at all. I found myself reading a little bit and then having to stop for dinner or something, then I found myself getting anxious and couldnt wait to finish. The story was great and the details were even better. The only thing I found myself wondering was lisa on birth control? Surely with all the sex something had to happen. Still great none the less.

I also am wondering if the sister gets pregnant. I think you being such a talented writer and all, you could make a sequal. Like maybe the brother and the sister are grown up and found another friend to fuck with, and you could tell how the whole pregnancy thing works out like whether she was on the pill or going it solo.

Your a talented writer, and this story was epic. 6/5. :D

A well written story, very long with plenty of action.

This story has prompted a huge number of positive comments. However the majority of these comments are anonymous and suspiciously similar in content, style and tone.

If you like incest stories, though, this one is for you.

Recommended.

This is simply marvellous work! Well... as marvellous as an incestuous story can get I suppose.

this is one of the best incest stories i've ever read and the longest! i didn't mind though i read this in pieces over the span of a week. and you know what? i enjoyed every bit of it and looked forward to it!

very good story would love to read more of what happens

I WAS,SUPPOSE TO GO TO SLEEP THEn I FOUND THIS GEM THAT LET ME LIVE OUT MY FANTICY (not to big on the mom part so I had to substitute her for my sister friend lol)

Longest incest story ever!

One of the best erotic stories ever!

Violence free even better!

Everyone should read this(thats over or pretends to be over 18)

Devious plot

Incest is

Taboo

Yeah baby im IRISH!

You got a problem with that

"swallow your pain;

feel your sorrow;

close your eyes;

and see tomorrow

death is naught

but a sensation you feel

if you don't believe

then it's not real..."

imigh go hEirinn

go to ireland

This is the best story ive ever read!!!! I saluteyou sir... i cantwait for number 2!!!! I sincerely hope that you do but i want you to seduce the dad next time to. I got to page 7 and was like, "omg how long can this story be!?" Hope you have a good day, life, and next story...i think same goes for everyone who reads this story. I was actually waiting for you tto have lisa invite that tony guy over and give him a blowjob...and have her say something like "this is what your missing out on so im givving you this as a goodbye present"...or something along those lines. Im sorry for spelling mistakes but im lazy cause its past 4 inthe morning here and im using a pandigital. I need to get to sleep. So goodnight everybody...but not untill i bookmark this story.

-A.

P.S. you should write a book...about this kind of stuff or not i dont care because i know that it will be good...or you could compile all of your stories that you put on here and make a book out of it and/or write stories just for the book and advertise it somehow...if you do then you should definitely put this story into it. Or you could write it with a lot of other authors on here from a multitude of nationalities and religions so that you can make a story for everyone. Think about it. Andwhats up wiith the security code thing i have to put in topost this? I just dont see the point or howit keeps things more secure.

Holy shit, I'm a 37 year old man with a wife and 2 kids and I respect you good sir, btw, I cummed more then 4 times throughout the story.......sort of lost me with mom though, that's nasty

Dude this is amazing. It taught me some good tips and damn i came like 6 or 7 times during the length of it. The mom part was a little much but still an awsome story. Thanks for the fun:)

-sir cums alot

Holy shit that was the best story I've read i came tonnes throughout that.

OMG so good i wish someone would make a movie of this!!!

Best story ever!!!!!!!!!!!

From start to finish. It was absolutely amazing. It made ME want a 3 way and im a 1 person gal! Lmao! :-) made me cum, cum, and cum.again and left me wanting in pretty much every hole! If your as adventurous and as willing as jack, then your girlfriend is a lucky fucking woman! Totally jealous! :-P

Keep.up the amazing work!

Xxx

Loved ever story I have read by you and every one is better that the last one I read... Keep them Cumming......

This going to the next movie but it will probably be n-17 rated

One helll of a detailed story, was absolutley wonderful. I felt like I was there watching...

I loved this sooo much this story has given me a new experience in my sex life wow this has to be made into a movie seriously. Is there a movie for this please where can I find it?

I fell in love with the character, Lisa. She's a great character! Is there other stories featuring her? Please make on, at least a spin-off. :D

This was litterly amazing. I would never dream of fucking my own family members, but if 'Jack' can have his fantisies, who says anyone in real life cant?! Is there another story that leads on from this?! I hate to read books but I couldn't stop reading this story! I do rate this story 5 star!!!

The best story ever

That was so amazing

Extremely well written story although the harness bit did seem to be shoehorned in.

I want your sister and your mom nude pics...n i also want to fuck both of them

You should make porn movie out of this

Assume I loved it

i loved it. if you charged to read this, you would be swimming in gold right now lol. anyways great job!

man that was the best story ever,you should make it into a movie

that was amazing! i wish i were you.

I came sooooo much...

This is a really great story I love happ sex between Sisters and Brothers. Twins more then anything.

The trouble with Lit is that it requires all of the th players to be 18, I would have started this at 14, 15 tops. As long as both where on board and there was no forse or abuse. In my State 14 used to to legal with No Upper age limit. About 10 years ago we passed a rarelt enforced 16-5 Law. Mostly to keep the ped off our kids abut at the same time not put the same or close aged kids in threat of jail. In short leave young sex to the young. Again Rarely enforced. Still helped pass it and i still like it.

4 years wasted when at 14 they could have been gorwing up togeather fucking their same aged brains out.

Still a great story and if you Post it on another site like xnxx just lower the discovery age to 14, an you will be a star.

OMFG MAN THIS STORY WAS SO HOT, WHEN ME ND MY 42DD SISTER READ THIS, WE FUCKED EACH OTHER LIKE THERE WAS NO TOMORROW

most amazing story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (and i read harry potter as a child)

I can't even count how many times I came while reading this!!

One of the best I've read on here!

multi-orgasmic x thank you

HOT!!! I was reading this and jacking off when Mom walked in and after seeing what I was reading wanted me to eat her.

damn! so vivid this has to be true

Good job man.

Dam this was more then a dream come true its like a gift from well who knows but wow we all need times like this but I bet this would be a great stories for sex couples lol

That was the best story I've read so far

Whoa i just had an orgasm myself while reading this!!! I seriously wish i had a brother.

mmm who knew an eighteen year old girl could get off so much by reading a story like this. I finger fucked myself the whole story and rubbed my clit til it almost felt sore. I came a total of 4 times. Fucking amazing. This story is great, by far one of the best I've ever read. If I had a hot twin brother I would totally fuck him all the time. mmm ;)

Thanks for writing such an exciting story. ^__^

I never thought a story like this would get me so hot!! ugh if only my bf was here he'd be in for one hell of a ride ;)

Omg the best ive ever heard

I pulled myself the whole time reading this, it was hard to read and pull, took me about 2 hours, as soon as I finished, I shot my load, I'm so glad I imagined it in first person. ;)

Really awesome. Very well-written.

This has to be the most erotic, raunchy, and most well-written story here on Literotica. Very few gramatical mistakes, it kept the reader's attention through the entire work, and it got me off (numerous times). Thank you for your contribution. And we all hope to here more from you!

Coming from a fellow writer. This was awesome. I think it was better than anything i've written.

not to say about this story in words but it will about feelings....thanks

this is amazing, keep writing.

that was one of the horniest stories ever for me. thanks

Totally believable and had me hard the whole read. I reckon It would get me off 10 times if I could just get some damned privacy!

It is my favorite story of all I have read here, and that is a lot! :)

the best story. great emotion and detail to set the scene

this erotic and passionate story is an excellent example of just how deep incestuous relationships can be. I thoroughly enjoyed it and look forward to reading more of your work.

I loved how well you used detail and natural curiousity/ perviness young guys normally have... This was just the right length, any more & it'd have been too drawn out, any shorter and detail would have sufferred too much. For several aspects of incest, this was great, virgin twin sister with slightly experienced brother, then the way they work on their mom, until they gang up on her to seduce her into a 3some. Glad you gave it closure at the end too with them having an apartment together as they went off to college & their mom coming for visits. I have to wonder whether Mom or the daughter is going to end up pregnant at some future time as a result of this! make an interesting little sequel I think...

Well if had more stars to rate it i'd used them!

i fuck my maid and she was a slut that is why i hired her but you are sick dude it would have been better if she was your step sister

call me class perev, but like it was said. Perfect length, detail and ending m more pls..

i like the way u wrote this story i really like .and the way how u describe the events movments behaviours u'r the best describer i see in my life nnnnnnnnnnnnnnniiiice

I really enjoyed this story about the incest between the brother and sister and how mom got involved this story made me really horny makes me think back to my teenage years when I did my two sisters this was well written story I really enjoyed it so much

One of the BEST stories I have read that added an additional person to the mix in such a way that it didn't ruin the flow and tone of the storyline. Great job! I loved the research and experimentation parts, too, lol What fun!!

i don't know who and how write this, but srsly the most erotic story i ever read.

Like whem i first read trough myself the "YUME MIRU KUSURI" Japan hentai game, pervert, and romantic in the same time whit kind of "cute" parts.

Best Regards -Smeea-

This story is so great that it made me cum several times and not just a small load....

That's it - Fascinating!!

One of the most engaging and exciting stories I've read. Amazing