All Comments on 'My Virgin Sister'

I have been putting of reading this as it said 9 pages. But this story is worth every 9 pages of it. A short preview ended up as a full story, and i forgot to sleep.

The flow is amazing. Though i didnt like it in the present tense. I feel that an all present tense story doesnt make sense, esp since your running across multiple timelines.

Good story but idk about fucking your sister and then you own mom alittle to much thats seriously not right even though i was curious and read upon this...cousins is the only exception i would probably say is ok because not forbiddin in the bible and not that much incest...

Great story. I'm a bit unsure about it being your mom and sister but other than that, it was great!

WELL THIS A BIT LONG BUT I THINK ITS WORTH WHILE READING SOME GREAT

HOT SPOTS AND GOOD WRITEING AND NO BACK LOGS KEPT ME INTERESTED

ALL THE WAY TO THE END A GOOD 5 PLUS STARS..................."R"........................

I really liked this story, but fucking your sister....I could kind of get over that, but when you fucked your mum it really made me gag, alot. (In the bad way. ._. )

wouldn't fingering ur sis hurt (hurt her)? and fucking ur mom is just wrong

ok now im a 17 year old kid im very into incest nd i fucking love u 4 posting this story iv been up since 3 in the morning reading this it is now 6:43 nd iv had 2 hav cum over 15 times this was so fucking hot i stayed hard throu the whole thing lik i said im very into incest nd i love you 4 sharing just wish i could have been in on it;) i am going 2 mak an account stating im 18 but look 4 johnnyboy1794 ill b comming or hmu on skout john anthony puccino;DDD nd idk who sees this u want me message me on skout;DDD

is there another one of your sex storys with your mum and sis i have cum 3 times while reading this fuck you need to start writing sex novols if not my email is supersum0@hotmail.com cant wait to read more ........the one and only fan peace

Im a 16 year old only child, and have fantasized about fucking my mom or a girl across the street whom is a lot like my sister. dont worry about all the comments hating on you its there fault for looking into incest stories hahaha maybe they are just Trololoing lol great job thanks :D but guys... i dont need to know hom many times you have cum while reading lol

good job dude! this is the best story i've read so far! keep it up

Please write more of you incest stories I love them!

fuck me fuck me fuck me fuck me fuck me fuck me

I have loved every one of your stories so far but this one really had me hooked from the first page. Believe me it brought back some long ago memories of my brother/s and most recently over the last two years, my son. I look forward to reading more from you. Thank you.

I love this story I couldnt help but read it all great job :D

I wish i had a sister -_-

This story was great, had me horny from the first paragraph. hope there's more to cummmmm.

I have to be up early and thanks to this genius I have up for god knows how long reading and fantasising. I have a younger sister and when she gets to a certain age I really think I'm going to look at her in a completely different way than I would have having no read this story.

Thankyou.

this was incredible! worth the 2 hours to read it

Reminds me of my sister and how we would play together - she loved me licking her pussy for her, and would suck my cock till I came over her usually between her legs as we simulated fucking

never got to do anything with my mum but sure want to and still do - stories like this don't help repress those feelings!

i wish i have brother

This is proably the best incest story i have ever and while ever read! Great job!

I had to stop and take things in hand several times while reading this story. I have a sister that may or may not fit this story to tee. It could be memories or dreams I'm recalling but I'm having to go take things in hand again. Great story!!!!!!

That story was magnificent suspense love sensuality and such sexy descriptions I wish I had an incest sister. My life would be complete. Literotica has made my teenage years the best in my life

Such a great story,

I just wish I had a sister.

What.......The......Fuck , that was a amazing story oh......my...god

Somehow in a desperate attempt to escape visual pornography I've wound up reading incestual love stories between brother and sister. DAMN, this was a good one but when you brought the mom into it, then it just got awkward. Either way, you are a lucky man

the first 3/4 chapters are awesome.then it became lengthy and bringing in the Mum seemed to be unreal.The story should have ended with the sister .The impact would have been greater.I always acted similarly with my sister,younger by 2 years but unfortunately it stopped at my fingerng her wet pussy and our sucking.She was afraid to go further.We are now married both on our side and it is after 15 years that we have started to talk about these unforgettable moments and we have started again with the fingering and kissing and she has now agreed to have a sex relation with me to catch up with the time lost!!This will be done next month when we shall not join in a trip to be made by our respectve families for a period of 3 weeks.

I absolutely loved this story... I jacked off and came 4 times while reading the whole thing, idk why it got me so hard and horny after every page! I LOVE the transverse from innocent to nympho too! And the part when the mom was getting into the whole thing had me on edge. :D AMAZING. good work. I would love for you to make another one like this or a sequel to this.

Great story, except, I have to agree that bringing mom into the picture detracted from it. I love brother sister love but hate cheaters which her mom is.

I hate when a guys ass gets played with :( good thing i skim anything that had anything to do with that but great story...i thought that bringing the mom into it actually worked out for the better and it also took me by surprise...kind of sad that it took till the last page for Jack to stick it in but whatever

great especially when you brought mom into it.

I loved d story bt don't buy d idea of anal sex(never will) nd d part der mum played. Overall, gr8 story!

this was a great overall read, very descriptive and well written, i came a total of 7 times in 2 days reading this thank you very much

It wasn't even to the second page and it's already good.

Fantastic story---until Mom got involved. The action between the twins was incredibly erotic; some of it was almost believable. Getting Mom in there mucking about just spoiled so much for me.

Some commenter was asking, "Where was my sister when I was that age?" Well, I didn't have a sister. Tried to use a brother, but it just wasn't the same.

O my god! That made me sonnet and I came like a million times.

Wow i want this guys sister she turnd me on

made me wish I had a brother... I came so often that I lost count. It was just what I needed.

I came more from this story than I have on any ever before it! I grew up with a sister just like that and we fucked like crazy until college so this story really worked me up. and the bringing the mom in was like a dream! damn that was hot! the last two pages I went without coming and then at the end I lost it and blew my load 4 feet in front of me.....damn good writer

I loved the story until mom came In

My dick aches because of this story. I came so much, it was enough to fill two medicine cups. Awesome job man!!!!!

I jizzed no less than 5 times per page...

I love this story!! If only I had a twin brother who would put my feelings first!!

Is there any pics of your sis and you

Easily one of the best stories I've read! Keep up the great work!

I loved this . Made me horny on every page . Make more

Presumably, this bit of creative writing has too many grammatical errors for a Cardinal grad.

Absolutely AMAZING story!!!

You surprised me on every page!! Such a good read.

I lost track of time as I read this story, it was so engrossing. Great story, I look forward to reading more of your stories.

great story man very well written

I have only one thing to say.. it is 1:53 AM and I'm soaked!!

i loved d bro sis part..

sm hw adding mom in was kinda turn off for me..

bt b4 tht.. u had me wet n craving for more..

I loved it I was so hard the entire story but I agree with the other guy adding in mom was a lil bit of a turn off but overall it was great

This is amazing, I spent a few hours reading this, but it was great.

^_^

Bringing mom into the story made it too long for comfort. And we have to think Lisa and mom were both on the pill. or they would certainly be preggies, but why? Explain. The buildup to Jack and Lisa's first time was very nice, but then the rest could have been developed into a second chapter.

That was a really good one. Sucked me right in and didn't loosen its grip before the end. I didn't habve any time to think about things like believabilty or stuff.

Very well done!

i liked the bother and sister fucking parts but the mom was not a major turn off but it didnt really get me horny..

I think the story would have been better without including mum!!

That was really great. It gave me a great big erection

You are amazing please keep it up 1 of the very best I've read in a very long time

My twin sisters & I loved reading this short book love story, that the only comment we got is keep writing more... PLEASE! Even our mom liked it too,& she married us 3 together & we 3 live together (without mom) & we are expecting our second child in 9weeks.

I was a turn off when you included mom :( but other than that it was great and made me horney

I've read this more than once and it is so much better than just about any other story here on Literotica. First, the writing, in general is tons better as is the plot. Second the gradual progression and the slow gradual unfolding of the intimacies is done superbly.

One of the best stories on this forum! Great job!

This story was so well written! I loved how you included how the mom or lisa mastrubated. I think i came two or three times while reading this

verey verey good loved it never have i read or seen a love story this goood

That was the most erotic story I've heard man, keep it up!

This is probally one of the sexiest incest stories i have ever read ive came so many times during the story i just cant stop reading it0

this was the best thing i ever read and just kept cumming over and over about it keep it up cuz this is the best ever!

I'm a security officer and be bored at work but I'm so glad i found this. i read a few but this is the best. it took me 2 shifts to finish it but my dick got rock plenty of times & help my day go by faster. no the less it was very intresting. guess there's nothing else to do but go home and taste my wiife jucies as you mentioned and wait for another mind blowing story ...... .thanxs for the entertainment

A total load of rubbish

God!! Incest stories aren't my thing ... or should I say weren't?! Wow, this is the hottest story I've ever read, when they manage to get Mom involved too ... let's just say that I've never come that often in one story!!! That was incredible, thanks for sharing.

This is my favorite story of all the submissions for Literotica. Anything coming out soon?

This is absolutely the best fucking story I read in this page !!!

the only things missing are as follws.

1) sis didn't fucked in her ass.

2) dad didn't catch them (mom or sis)

3} they don't have a 4 way. good . story.

I THIUGHT THIS STORY WAS SO HOT AND WISH IT COULD GO ON FOREVER

Great story! It reminds me so much of how bad I should tuck my sister. She is a virgin but wears a C36 bra and and is smoking. Thankyou for your purely exciting and enjoyable story ;) =>()

A really good story

I hope you write more like this

It takes all kinds to make a world. For me, this story is a clear 5 when the action is between the sister and the brother. It drops to a 3 when mom shows up. That is al about taste, and clearly mine runs to people of the same age.

Nicely written.

I couldnt stop rubbing myself the whole way through this!, amazing..

Fantastic story. I thought introducing Mom would lower the score but you did it as part of the story. To bad the score sheet only went up to 5. A definite 10+.

This is the best story I have read here. I have to admit it brings back some of my thoughts about my sister that never went anywhere. I came more than once reading this and stioking at the same time. Just an outstanding story.

pls morrrre

NICE..............REAL NICE

story. It is one of the best I've read. Hope there is more.

loved it. kept me hard the entire time i read it

there can be no doubt that it is a H.O.T story, however plz remember that haymen is actually a tight ring outside and not inside the pussy and would have been broken the moment he entered, it can also be streched by fingering and then the first time is not as bad :) xxx

I thought Haymen were scarecrows.

Cool,very.

Samslam has written a wild ride of a story. The usual incest story seems to be only one kind of relationship, while this one has two - sibling on sibling and child on parent. Awesome.

definitely one of the best stories that I have read in a long while! Definitely a fantastic writer and they are not easy to find. Keep up (pun intended) the great words... um works!

Absolutely fucking sucking wonderful, Jack seems a bit like me, loves to get totally drunk on cunt juice. My girl friend her best friend and I acted out some of this out and kept it up till we all passed out, cunt juice and spunk everywhere. Started over as soon as we recoverd. Nearly fucked and sucked each other into the next world.

Best story like this I and the girls have ever read. More and more of this please and soon. Cunt lapping sex maniac, Lanc's UK

Best fucking sex/incest story I have ever read. I have always wanted to fuck my sister, but NOT my mother, but I would like to fuck my aunt. I jerk off thinking about my sister and my aunt all the time. I also love getting a glimpse of my sisters tits when she bends over.

All I can say is "squirt, squirt, squirt!!!"

5 STARS~~~~~

I got so wet just reading that

I get wet often but reading that pure bliss

I got so wet omg ! I want to fuck so bad right now!

I'd just love to fuck who ever is WET...!!!!!

You lil boys say you want to fu*k but i dont want no ugly boy showin up at ma door no i need pictures if your brave enough to then send em to me.

ps: you weird if your still reading up to this point.......still reading weirdo lol :[

Very good story!!! I am so horny! I wish I had a big fat cock in my pussy right now!!! I would really live some rough kinky sex!