All Comments on 'My Wife and the Older Man Pt. 03'

by Krista16

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26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Carl's cuck

Boy, you and the whore have had six years. Buy a damned gun and blow Carl's head off. But a cuck wouldn't do that. He likes watching his whore wife with a 90 year old man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Why be married?

It is beyond my basic comprehension as to how a writer who biologically subscribed to the male of the human species..can be happy watching his mate be sexually satisfied by another ...and enjoy it enough to wank on it...!!! Is this not going against the very basics of being a man...unless he is not??

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Since when

Right now how do you describe the lowest form of scum yes a cuckold and the definition of cuckold oh yes a peeping tom or a voyeur so this pile of garbage should be shoved into the section which they have on this site oh yes exhibition and voyeur section is not the loving wife section why on earth would you put this in this section the wife wants to dominate and that’s not a loving wife you may think that they are married but who on earth would marry a cheating wife so unless she got what was coming to her not really a loving wife section is it might try the BDSM see if it ok there but not in section you are just baiting the proud people who read and write stories in this section to get to hate you so stop it and remember a cuckold is a voyeur so it should be in the voyeur section

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
This is more stupid than the other parts

A man after 5 years in prison, what is the first thing he does? To look for trouble and try to return to prison. And part 4 of this garbage is announced. Please spare us!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Geez

I actually thought he would man up and get carl or divorce. But no. He jerks off and encourages it. Guess his daughter will grow up like mommy and his son like daddy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
story

Another crap cuck story just like all the rest total crap get life

ScorpioJJScorpioJJover 4 years ago
Garbage

Please put this crap in the fetish category

bigbob2406bigbob2406over 4 years ago

Why does everyone keep writing this execrable cuck crap?? Hells teeth, grow some balls and write a decent story people want to read!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Simply horrible writing

On every level imaginable.

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Loved it!

I thought this was the best cuckold story I've read on this site. You are a very talented writer and I hope you write more stories in this genre. Thanks!

wallace99wallace99over 4 years ago
Outstanding

Hopefully this chapter will get a better rating once the monogamy brigade turn their sights on some other cheating wife/cuckold story. My only criticism is I wish this chapter was longer!

LPCreamLPCreamover 4 years ago

Yes yes yes, this is fantastic and has me hard as a rock! Can't wait for part 4 or whatever else you write.

Please do keep going ... these are great :).

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Jesus Christ

Try writing a good story next time.

It's not even the subject material I object to, it's the storytelling having all the internal consistency and plausibility of a bottom shelf Tijuana bible.

premshankerpremshankerover 4 years ago
After Delivery

Even pregnancy is no hindrance for Carl to fuck Luci's juicy pussy, then

it will be 'volcanic' after birth

Instead of 'dick' holding why cant Steve join the 'fun'

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
yo

Fan of your other stuff, especially the massage series, but this pregnancy shit got me shook. Keep on writing, tho

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
It is amazing that the few bottom feeders

Who can not seem to find love, think it is so romantic to have some fool willingly share the most precious thing a man has to give with them, because they are so worthy of it. I guess they never heard the old axiom at the mens cirtification club: Touch my wife and die and if she lets you, then she is not my wife and never was. No wife = No alimony and no child support.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Tell them

Tell them you'll wait outside and burn the cabin with them in it. Takes care of Carl and the whore.D6tx

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Understanding

Husband has finally reached an understanding that he’s got a hook in her and she’ll never be able to say no. Like a lock and key his bigger cock fits her pussy just right and nothing can change that. It very hot to watch a married woman that can’t say no giving in to someone she might not even like. To bad he’s not black, that would push the haters over the edge.

Keep writing and have the husband watch the kids as Carl comes to visit and takes their mom into the bedroom. EfofR0

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More Carl, more videos

I hope the next chapters has Carl coming over to try and knock up Lucy as many times as he can!

TatankaBillTatankaBillover 4 years ago
Well written

Your story is well told. You write well and developed the theme with a slow burn without drawing it out too long. I loved the first chapter- considerably more than what followed. I understand that cuckold humiliation is what you're portraying here and you accomplished that admirably. It's not my thing. I despise arrogant jackasses and in particular BIG arrogant jackasses, who appear to think their size is subject to no equalizers. So of course I hated Carl, and I didn't care for Lucy a hell of a lot more. But of course, they are what moves your story to it's emasculating conclusion!

I'll have to try your other submissions since in spite of it not being in my erotic wheelhouse, I enjoyed your storytelling skills.

Ray RobertsRay Robertsover 4 years ago
Another good account of the wife with a hung stud.

Your stories are excellent, and for a lover of these "loving wife" stories you manage to hit the mark. You have the ability to make a complex personal situation into seemingly everyday situations. More please I love the married loving couple plus hung stud theme and much like the characters, I can' get enough!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
where is part4?

where is part4? we wating you since 3 month i hope u contiune this series

eh9198eh9198about 4 years ago
Hope to see part 4

This really needs to be a situation where hubby starts to hate it, and wifey keeps cheating, eventually making fun of him and leaving with him for good. It’s been teased so much. Time to close the deal.

rushman1ukrushman1ukabout 4 years ago

Fantastic part 3. We all need that part 4 hopefully a part 5, 6 etc

K & S xx

Krista16Krista16about 4 years agoAuthor
Production of part 4

This will begin soon

PervertedKnightPervertedKnightabout 4 years ago
2 stars

I enjoy your writing ability, but this part was nonsensical. Why would Lucy, who pretty much was raped by a sociopath, return to him? She was a faithful, shy wife in the first two stories, so to have her turn into a conniving, lecherous slut is totally out of character for her. Had she been blackmailed into this, then I could have appreciated the movies, but she went willingly, and that makes no sense. The husband's reaction is even more nonsensical as he goes from objecting husband who rescues his wife to an immediate cuckold who enjoys it and wants it? No more, thank you very much.

betamale08betamale08about 4 years ago

Awesome!

Love the pregnant wife and she knew about being filmed... Very hot...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
❤ = ☆☆☆☆+ [4+ (4.4/5)].

52 faves, 29,013 views, that's 1.79 faves per 1k views (an outstanding faves to views ratio). Bravo!

iameaseliameaselover 3 years ago

Ridiculous horse shit.

The husband and wife need to be shot, should have been before they procreated abd added more stupidity into the worlds gene pool.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Perfect Hot Wife

All it needs is continuos persistent encouragement in the right direction from the husband who needs to be completed committed.

The story is an excellent idea to convert an uptight Asian conservative wife to a Hot Wife and really enjoy life to its full content.

Women must understand nearly all woman 99% including their mother and sister have enjoyed are enjoying outside marriage. It is perfectly fine. Only nobody talks about it openly

OldnotDead71OldnotDead71about 3 years ago
LOL

I have to say, I almost enjoyed reading the frenzied (and often misspelled) comments from the haters, as much as the story! We all knew where this was going. If you don't want to subject yourself to feeling upset, don't read it! But don't mark the man down. Respect him as a writer, since none of you seem to be able to string a sentence together without numerous grammatical errors.

Okay, rant over. I enjoyed the writing, but I thought you had Lucy commit to Carl again way too quickly. You cheated us on that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
What a cunt

Seriously would you want to stick your dick in the sloppy hole of that slut she’s probably got aids from that duck head convict (it runs rampant in prison so ...) and the ho isn’t sorry at all so good riddance to them both they’re worthless and belong together

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
Everyone ...

... in this story is a certifiable psychotic - as is the writer.

Deeply disappointing, shallow, insane ramblings. No more. Bye.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Each chapter gets better! Don't let the negative comments stop future Chapters.

BigGreg8xBigGreg8xover 2 years ago

Brilliant chapter again did not see it coming!! HOT wives become addicted to this level of sexuality as mine did many years ago!!

26thNC26thNCabout 2 years ago

What kind of pussy won’t just blow Carl away?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I would hope that SOB soon would have a trip back to prison. Or I would if I got caught. For sure I would divorce herald spend every dime I could to get the children. No dumbass cuckold here. Had a friend of mine we were a group of buddies that stuck up for each other been in a few fights over the years just to help each other out. This story I'm about to tell is true. Jake one of our friend's wife Deborah was messing around on him with a rich guy Richard Smith. He was known as a womanizer. We got the proof that he needed that she was cheating. He was bound and determined to make the rich SOB pay. Believe me he did pay he actually ended up in the penitentiary because he had had tax problems before and now he had tax problems again. After he was sent away his wife became what she used to be. He asked her if something was wrong because she had changed? She did admit having an affair what would not tell him who it was with. She said she was afraid that he would do something to hurt the guy and she was sorry that it ever happened and would never happen again. He just said how can I believe that you made promises before. She said that she would prove it to him. He said he would still like to know who the SOB that was so much better than him so he could make sure things was set straight with the cheater homewrecker. She would not tell so he threatened divorce. Then she finally broke down and told him. He said you mean that a Sobe that was in the news and sent away to the penitentiary for tax evasion? She admitted that it was him. He said nothing like this would ever happen again or it definitely would be the end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Just more trash!

Buster2UBuster2Ualmost 2 years ago

What many of these complainers don't understand is that Carl has a Big Cock, he knows how to flirt and make her panties wet. She gets turned on by all this Naughty attention to the point she just can't resist her Sexuall Drive. I've seen it a zillion times, just not for me. 5 stars to the writer. Good Job. I really like the scene a couple chapters back when she came back from the Hotel and she fucked Hubby talking about it. Similar how we used to do years ago.

Jlyn1Jlyn1over 1 year ago

Cuck crap 😡

maddictmaddict11 months ago

"I...I didn't expect him to send this now. I'm so sorry I didn't tell you." Lucy apologized.

Hot that it's you and not me. Size does matter after all.

nancysilksilknancysilksilk11 months ago

and dont want to any more!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Terrible storytelling no way if he treated his wife like crap would the husband be ok with just because of a video. If anything I would have beat the crap out of carl with a bat and my cheating wife would b at her mother's after I told her parents what she did.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

They just got stupider.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Yes I was weak when I discovered that my wife Tara was cheating according to some people. I forgave her after talking about her affair. She said that she wished she could turn back time. I agreed and I didn't believe in divorce and we could get past her flaw. The affair was actually over before I knew that she was having an affair. Things were going good and then out of the blue a few years later I was working in my shop. I heard a vehicle pull up out front. I didn't pay any attention. Next thing I knew it was that SOB standing at my feet. I yelled you homewreacking SOB get off of my property. I was working under my truck that I was restoring. I sure was glad that I had put safety stands under it because he grabbed the floor jack and released it just as I hit him in the leg with a breaker bar. He fell. I rolled out from under the truck and was surprised to see Tara. She was holding a pry bar. She had hit him at the same time as I had. It appeared that she had broken his arm. I knew that I had hurt his leg but didn't really know how bad. We put him in his truck without anyone saying a word. He started his truck as I said stay away from my wife and family the next time will be worse. We never seen him again. Fine by me.

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I'm a British guy who is a fan of the cuckold/hotwife genre. I haven't published a story in a few years. Hoping to get the motivation/inspiration soon! Christmas 2023 update - aiming to make some strides in 2024. I want to wrap up current stories featuring Endo and Carl and...