All Comments on 'My Wife, Her Lovers and Me'

Fantasizing, what comes next?

What a load...of rubbish.

Some people really are dumb. And some writers are really dumb. And the worst type of people are people like these characters a wife hit by the fucked up skank whore ray amd the husband hit by the cosmic cuck and eunuch wimp no balls ray. Only cucks and whores and hot wife cuntds and feminist will enjoy this story.

Is this the new way of posting stories? Sequel first then part one?

She's going to use him up and throw him away.

Would love to know...what happens next 🤔👍

Wait, just realised there is a second part...ooops, my mistake 😳 😬

To many of us there's nothing hotter than a hot wife, hot for both her husband, and for other men too. Congratulations on an immaculately written story. So many writers here have an erotic story in their heads, but they wouldn't know grammar and punctuation rules if they came up and bit them on the ass. It's so nice (and extremely rare) to read a story not rife with distracting errors. Thank you for your work!

Great start. Looking forward to part 2

"Wait, just realised there is a second part...ooops, my mistake"

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How is it your mistake when the second part -- with a different title, no less -- was pasted BEFORE this one?

Sometimes it helps to be honest with yourself. Sometimes you just screw the pooch. Learn your lesson. Take your medicine. Move on. In this case you get a divorce and find someone else.

"Billy Joel is playing on the radio, just loud enough to hear, but soft enough so that we can talk over it."

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Told me Everything I need to know about this author, and can presume about his/her story. Completely irrelevant and without any intelligent plot or drama. Really, we need to know they are listening to music. And we need to know the musician. And we need to know how the volume of the music is affecting their communication, their connection, their marriage. Really. Billy Joel. You are brain dead. Enjoy the bliss.

A true slut story. Meet the husband in clothes just thrown on and to tease and brag about what she had done. What a useless husband for not satisfying her.

Fetishism. Foot play, cuckold fantasy, and age related fetishes. Had it only been a guy adoring his wife and her feet that would have been more understandable. But pulling in the other themes and playing out the fantasy of cheating in the presence of her husband puts it firmly into another genre.

Title said it all. 1*

These guys have no subtlety to them. There is no moderation in their persona. Instead, they are like the male equivalent of the woman controlled by the Martian Slut Ray. So, every story is a fait accompli. In fiction, the reader needs to be kept guessing, but these stories have no mystery, no surprise. That translates into hella DULL. The first cuck story I ever read was the only one I ever needed to read. Looking for something different in these stories is akin to seeking El Dorado. But unlike the mythical city, there's zero chance of finding something unique in a cuck story. That's why most normal people hate them.

"To many of us there's nothing hotter than a hot wife, hot for both her husband, and for other men too."

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Just the opposite. From the regular very low readers rating, these kind of fetish-cuck fantasies are very much disliked by the vast majority of the LW readers.

I agree with the comment that this tale was exceptionally well-written, and for that alone I would have given you a 3 minimum because so many "writers" on here simply cannot write. But you made your characters quite believable, and I thought the wife was a treasure for not laughing at the husband when he bared his soul and told her about his foot fetish. And then for her to go along with the "younger man" fantasy to make her husband feel better made me like her even more--many wives would have shrieked and run into the bathroom crying and chastising the husband for not loving them anymore. I loved role-playing with my ex on the few occasions when she was horny enough to do it, so this brought back some fond memories. I did think your tale was a bit brief, but that is the only critique I have against giving you a 5. Cheers!

Not my cup of tea but well written.

Be careful. I think role-play may have been part of the reason my wife cheated on me. It was a very long and rough road to get to where I guess would call normal now. It can not ever be what it was before and never will be. She said that's what she wants it to be like before. That's what she said while we were arguing. I said well just UNF*** him then. She said she would if she could.

Don’t think practice will help this one.