All Comments on 'My Wife, His Property Ch. 05'

Hey my readers! As always, an early access link to the next chapter is in my bio ;)

The best story of all stories in Literotica. Want continue....

It was a great series up to this point. Chapter 5 was a disappointing retelling of chapter 4 with a boat-load of grammar errors. So many that I almost rated it a 2 and feel compelled to offer my editing assistance (feel free to reach out to me)

The story didn't move forward and the best part was ruined by a phone call.

Hopefully Pixel bounces back with chapter 6.

5 Stars! I want to see the next chapter!

Very good story. Hope you continue. May not need all retelling. When chapter 6 arrives, you can refer to chapter 5 or all of the chapters. Will be exciting to hear when Jerome comes to visit Olivia and Ben.

I like the story. I'm in love with the smokin' hot Olivia. Don't know if anal will be introduced later but there is a great opportunity for a DP with the husband participating, except in these stories the black bulls tend to be possessive of their "white bitches". What brings that to mind is the fact that Olivia wouldn't make out with Jerome, a twist I apllauded. Jerome also backed off when she did that, at least hinting he has respect for her. Also the 3-way she did with "Alex" and Ben hints she will want to include Ben in a future 3-way with Jerome. I agree with Oatmeal's comment below about the atrocious grammar. The missing word, the wrong word or too many words detracts from the flow of the story. I suggest you find someone to proofread before publishing especially since Oatmeal has offered. I don't withhold stars for grammar so I gave you 5 stars for the story. If it's bad enough I just stop reading and move on. Plenty to choose from

This story continues to be wonderful! And there are so many avenues for it to take. Well done! Amy x

You absolutely MUST write the next chapter. 😈

Jerome will own both of them, she's still a black cock virgin. He will own her when her sissy boyfriend is made to watch, her lose her black cock cherry. Jerome will make Ben turn sissy and Oliva will watch. and help as, she feeds Jerome's cock into Ben's mouth. Will Oliva take her first black cock bareback?. Will Ben swallow for the first time, with Oliva watching. Does Oliva want to share her first black cock? There are so many conflicts, making them both black owned by Jerome. I am hoping for chapter six. It's gotta be hot. When a white female to take a black cock bareback, there can be are surprise results.

Please post the next chapter! This is the best story serie I've ever read!

very hot story mmm

yes they are ready to be owned and used by a BBC - she is ready to tell him to suck a cock for her and guide his BBC into her pussy. He is ready to suck cocks and be fucked after the BBC fucks her.

I've read a lot of BBC and interracial erotica and my god I think this story absolutely takes the cake... hottest story I've seen by far, come back to it a million times. Just fucking LOVE Olivia's descent into the ultimate pleasure, encouraged by her loving husband. I can't wait for the next chapter.

There's a pretty big pause in publications, patreon is dead, maybe there won't be a sequel?