All Comments on 'My Wife's First Time Ch. 05'

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 1 year ago

This is a completely different story than your previous submissions. The names are the same but that’s it.

Don’t get me wrong, I like this version better but it shares little to no commonality with the other chapters.

In this chapter, she loves her husband very much and has an open marriage. In your previous chapters, her actions and her words are incongruent: she says she loves Frank but behaves like he doesn’t exist.

rodryder44rodryder44over 1 year ago

Your software is failing you; hair instead of hire is one example. The story gets good marks as a hot wife saga and hubby needs lots of blue pills to keep his pre cum flowing.

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