by Vic5
Very very nice. I enjoyed it very much and almost came while reading it. Thank you, Ian UK
give and take policy is the best policy. no grudges or grumblings whatsoever. mutual satisfaction and fulfilment. i fuck ur wife while u do my wife is thoroughly satisfying for both the couples. broad understanding and broad mindedness are essential to continue 4somes. there is another possibility of getting new couples also, this one is coherent in all details in simple and lucid style. i had the best chance of reliving my old swinging and swapping. a million thanks to u. i became one with the characters.
Good start for the story, more depth is needed for characters and plot. Story seems rushed without any finesse.
Why would a guy get married when he's just going to loan out his wife? And to a guy with a bigger dick that leaves her wanting more from the strange dick than her own husband. This kind of crap just makes no sense.
He had a good time. She had a good time. They had a good time. Did I have a good time? No.
about as erotic as watching paint dry. There is nothing to this story to hold ones interest. Willing cuckoldry is non-erotic drivel. ONE STAR
Nothing Kinky, it was like two separate stories with couples fucking, nothing erotic or kinky to wet my knickers