by CaptAdorable
She told me the next day that we would no longer be physical.
The day after that I served her with divorce papers and moved out on her skanky ass.
That's the only proper response to a cunt who cuts you off to fuck her new boyfriend.
Let him deal with her mood swings and bullshit. He can do the dishes and laundry. Oh wait...he won't. Because he only cares about getting some easy slut pussy.
Stupid bitch.
Dude, you mistakenly placed your opus in the LV category, instead of your usual Sci-Fi & Fantasy. This is an even bigger rotten improbable fantasy than your previous works. No man, ex-military, will behave like this fucking sissy.
What the hell did I just read???? What a whimp of a husband and this story sucks. Definitely not worth a star
Just end it. Your kids are laughing at you. Your family is laughing at you. Your friends are laughing at you. Hell everyone is laughing at you. This character needs to grow a pair and get a life away from this bitch and his friends and his family. The kids are not the husbands anyway.
Wow. You should have stayed gone or re-entered with another sci-fi because this reeks to high heaven. What in the hell made you think another worthless cuck story was the way back into posting on Lit?
1/5*
That was funny. Captain Adorable, I bet you look so cute in your frilly apron and pink panties. Your mommy must be really proud.
Are you kidding me?? Another cuck story from one of Literoticas' authors? It sucks. Damn, why do they seem to enjoy this type of crap?
1 star only because Literotica doesn't have a "box" to click that represents disgust, which is beyond the "Hate It" star.
Divorce and arrange horror for the lover. Fuck her friends while getting evidence on her so she can't claim infidelity.
Last paragraph says it all. I wonder if this story is an autobiography? I don't have to wonder how many ☆ to give it. - TANSTAAFL
I like the story - tons of potential. However, the last paragraph came out of nowhere it seems. I like the direction a lot but i think it just developed too abruptly. Keep up the good work
ROFLMFAO
How the fuck did you come up with this travesty? Hit you head into a wall a few dozens times and then suddenly this arrived as some type of epiphany? Well sadly it was an epiphany but it came out the other end.
I think your story makes you look like a little lost puppy that needs to be kicked and then run over
Invite me over and I'll fuck her asshole and you can suck her shit off my dick you weak pussy boy. I'll feed her some real dick!