All Comments on 'My Working Family Pt. 02'

Pretty good. Keep it up. Can have more of a build up and can get kinkier. But I really enjoyed it.

Start taking some time to flesh out your stories. This is not even good jerk material because it lacks any emotion at all. The dad is also a shitty director and I can’t see how they would make any money at all.

You would be better off if you wrote fewer stories with more substance than publishing these large quantities of what amount to story outlines.

Still looking for Part 3. lol