by oggbashan
He was wonderful. You did a good job of showing his growth. But she ... doesn't seem good enough for him. Her definition of a man needs to change. I hope she grew up in the years after this story.
Nicely done, and fitted well around Myfanwy (the song). I have my doubts that anyone who lived in the Rhondda at this time would not have a better appreciation of the fears of miners and the bravery of the rescue teams, but it seems she got there in the end. Diolch!
This sure was a ride. I liked this. It was much too short for me, and I really would've liked to see just how scarred he was and a more in depth look at how he overcame it. Nonetheless, this was a very fun, sweet read. 4 Stars.