All Comments on 'Mysterious Ring Pt. 02'

I'm enjoying the story. I like the characters and the the way they are developing. I look forward to more chapters. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Fuck yes. This is going to be the best mind control sex story series ever for me.

A good start but the spelling is atrocious, you need an editor or proof reader.

the pacing seems of otherwise a good read

Great start chapter 1 and 2. You have intrigued me so i can't wait for more chapters.

the story is good, but it is clear English is not your first language, as you use the wrong words in places and it takes away from the story, you should learn better English and also get you a proofreader and an editor

Honestly I’m already in love with it great job

A good start- hot & with an interesting dynamic developing between the host & the ring.

Other than the odd typo & occasional missing word, I can't see what sexymeup is going on about.Yes, an editor/proofreader would be nice but your written language is fine.

I'm liking the Evil Siri. Now Lincoln needs to start having bigger and kinkier sex with his conquests to feed Evil Siri.

but you obviously have the same problem I do occasionally when your brain goes faster than your typing skills can keep up with. Nothing major, just hitting keys next to the one you want (list instead of lust, hear instead of heat) and the occasional missed word. I suggest re-reading before posting, but read what is written not what you think you have typed. Hope this helps.

I like. Keep going.

nice, hot introduction to his seduction. I look forward to him taking his sister

I enjoy the magic ring stories...

Good job.

So much potential. I checked, rings not available on Amazon.

Great story. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Good story. Look forward to more chapters.

Really like this story and waiting for more

It wasn't awful, but I'm not enjoying the downward spiral that the main character has apparently entered.

Why would you pick the happily married woman??? Asshole!!!

Nice story.

Is there any more to it?

It's good to be king or at least to wear something like a sorcerer's ring. This story definitely has series written all over it, I hope maybe you pick it up again. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.