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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Good short story

Many have to be tricked or force to achieve their true desire.

jclementjclementalmost 9 years ago
Fun Read

Not really my favorite story theme, but I did enjoy it. It deserves a part 2.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 9 years ago
Seriously...

this is incredibly hot.

It was well written, with good style, great dialogue, and omg sex.

It's a quickie, no doubt. I've got loads of questions about what came before this chapter and what came after. There is so much context that is just not present in this chapter. What IS present is the revelation of the protagonist's needy, inner slut.

Such a huge turn on.

Perhaps you could write a bit more about this character?

FailedscoutFailedscoutalmost 9 years ago
Damn Good!!!

Hell yes, great story!!!

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