All Comments on 'Nadia Pt. 01: The First Contact'

For goodness sake, why cut it off so soon? I come here to read the stories, not to have my time wasted by having topick up crumbs.

Great Story. I only miss a discription of her beauty and also it ends way to early! Very promissing.

Let us define "great" and "story" They are not synonymous with "good" and haha "crumbs." Please strive for something more than a few paragraphs. You have potential.