by greekmag
The is spell checkers online that you should use to help, otherwise great story
You did improve but there is still a lot missing. You need to go more into details. Its a pitty you never truly describe how they fuck. In more then one phrase. Try to work on this because the story has a lot of potential and anal should be mandatory! Hair pulling anal. Or course.
Loved it! So happy to see another one. This is becoming one of my favorite series on this site!