by potatoHead42
And here it goes, everybody seeing what they wanted to see.
The next chapter will be a breakthrough
You manage to surprise me every time with the artful ways you draw this out. I really enjoy the longer scenarios but really enjoyed the little dash and run ones you set up here.
Regards
L
Thanks everyone!
Anon, drunk rap? Lololol
Yeah it doesn’t read great, but was trying to justify… just saying they were drunk didn’t cut it last time
Thx
amazing! i love this series... i serious check every day for the next chapter! Best series on literotica!
The story is progressing perfectly and I always look forward to these. On to the beach chapter!
Wow. 10 chapters in, with still no penetration and no full-on fellatio, yet you keep us begging for more. And we're not even halfway through this saga!
A wonderfully written chapter with a detailed setup, thanks again for being so generous of your effort, given the short time and wild imagination to put out nine pages of edging Lana.
Can't wait to see what tricks our teacher will employ to get lots of "organic" sunscreen.
-Tf E
Thanks everyone!
Anon: lol! I know! Always long! Can’t help it
Thanks Tf E, L, cnsual and all the anons that commented
While the whole scenario with corrupting an innocent girl is great, the misunderstandings with her "fiancé" are so long that they became stupid and painful to read. Dennis serves no purpose, he is a spineless worm - such character may work for a short story, but now he brings disgust.
If you replace Lana's "devotion" to him with devotion to beliefs (she is from very religious household), nothing will change regarding her story, but it'll become less painful to read.
Could have a classroom game where they guess the underwear color.
more boundaries being broken with another girl as 'it doesn't count'
Story is going good..just waiting for the neighbors to convince lana to have sex
This story is unique ,funny and erotic in every sense except Lana's monologue all the time ...If you can do a little about it without removing it completely then it's a very very good story for sure!👍🏻
Thanks everyone for the support!
All the comments are appreciated
The slow corruption of this story is so good. You are doing an amazing job and I can’t wait for the next chapter.
While the event with Lilly and Jack was exciting, it dragged on way too long. Also, there was no reason to get them drunk. That ruined the whole show. The most interesting part of Lana and her students was left out. I mean the requirement that she now allow whatever the guys want.
For those asking when is the next part if you notice his timeline it's always a month or so apart. So I wouldn't expect anything before June 22nd
She helps all her needy students and is not afraid to help the 'uglier' or even fat guys. She seems to love being used by ALL the men.
Now she is Greg's school girlfriend (white lie). I think this is a development that no one saw coming. I really thought it was going to be BJ or Jim. I am not complaining because these guys are going to get their share. So it's good to include an outsider like that. Their second meeting is important because it shows that the meetings at school are continuing and that Greg is also corrupting and using Lana.
Chloe is such a teaser and a good 'role model' for Lana. One day they should 'work' together and have a foursome with two guys (maybe Principal Bill and Janitor Kenny or Prof. Henry). Chloe is also very hot and a good character.
I'm looking forward to the action with the TTT trio. I wonder how much cum she will get on her tits? :-)
My favourite encounter is with Principal Bill who is the best corruptor. Their meeting is longer than usual and I love longer encounters. Perfect! He is patient and knows how to work Lana based on his long-term plan. He is very aware that Lana will take his bait. Finally, she will wear nice dresses, hot uniforms and fancy underwear. This is important for me! I hope that one day she will buy her own provocative lingerie. Bill really should be her sexual mentor!!
Last but not least the evening with Jack and Lilly! I also like this long event, but for me the alcoholic factor (slurring) was a bit too much. No real criticism here because I understand your intent and it doesn't work without drinks at that moment. I would have liked to "see" the more intimidating pictures, but that would have been too much for Dennis and the story. He doesn't need to know all the corruption, seduction and cheating of his future wife.
It was very hot that she doesn't consider her fiancé for anal sex. Lana tells herself that it's "below Dennis' standards", but I think deep down she knows Dennis won't get the job done.
That is your tenth chapter, but it feels like the third or fourth. This is soo much entertainment! Well done!!
Kudos to PH for creating such an exciting story. This story should be made into a movie series. It's more erotic
than the famous Emmanuelle films, Nymphomaniac, and Alice in Wonderland. Regarding Ch. 10, I loved
her interaction with Greg and the bullies. Now that Lana is Greg's school girlfriend who can predict how far
their relationship will go especially with the pressure from the bullies. The principal Bill is working on Lana and
the Professor screwed up his plan. Next time Lana visits Principal Bill, she will be wearing the new sexy uniform and that
may be the time to kick things off. She gets hot very easily and the other characters in the story love her response.
I read up to Ch. 12A and can't wait for more...
Who are the School Board members and will they get a chance to meet Lana individually? Sounds like a possible
side story with some sex? Love Lana's character.
I had really hopes that Stockings would have been a part of her new Uniform. You mentioned them as part of the original School staff dress code in Chapter 1. But nothing after. Since she had to stop wearing Pantyhose/tights It was a logical next sexy option. Again no shoes LOL. still 5 stars