All Comments on 'Naive Teacher in Winston Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

And here it goes, everybody seeing what they wanted to see.

The next chapter will be a breakthrough

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

You manage to surprise me every time with the artful ways you draw this out. I really enjoy the longer scenarios but really enjoyed the little dash and run ones you set up here.

Regards

L

cnsualsu1cnsualsu1almost 2 years ago

really thanks!!! always enjoy it!!! god bless you!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

No to the drunk rap thing.

potatoHead42potatoHead42almost 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks everyone!

Anon, drunk rap? Lololol

Yeah it doesn’t read great, but was trying to justify… just saying they were drunk didn’t cut it last time

Thx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

amazing! i love this series... i serious check every day for the next chapter! Best series on literotica!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story! Excellent writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wow wow wow gets me going to the end every time can’t wait for the next

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The story is progressing perfectly and I always look forward to these. On to the beach chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Dude promises a short chapter, cranks out 9 pages. You're a wild man.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wow. 10 chapters in, with still no penetration and no full-on fellatio, yet you keep us begging for more. And we're not even halfway through this saga!

A wonderfully written chapter with a detailed setup, thanks again for being so generous of your effort, given the short time and wild imagination to put out nine pages of edging Lana.

Can't wait to see what tricks our teacher will employ to get lots of "organic" sunscreen.

-Tf E

potatoHead42potatoHead42almost 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks everyone!

Anon: lol! I know! Always long! Can’t help it

Thanks Tf E, L, cnsual and all the anons that commented

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

While the whole scenario with corrupting an innocent girl is great, the misunderstandings with her "fiancé" are so long that they became stupid and painful to read. Dennis serves no purpose, he is a spineless worm - such character may work for a short story, but now he brings disgust.

If you replace Lana's "devotion" to him with devotion to beliefs (she is from very religious household), nothing will change regarding her story, but it'll become less painful to read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

can't wait till the next story don't care how long it is so damn hot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Could have a classroom game where they guess the underwear color.

more boundaries being broken with another girl as 'it doesn't count'

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Story is going good..just waiting for the neighbors to convince lana to have sex

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

please release the new episode!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

They really taking their time approving this side story 😓

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This story is unique ,funny and erotic in every sense except Lana's monologue all the time ...If you can do a little about it without removing it completely then it's a very very good story for sure!👍🏻

potatoHead42potatoHead42almost 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks everyone for the support!

All the comments are appreciated

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The slow corruption of this story is so good. You are doing an amazing job and I can’t wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

While the event with Lilly and Jack was exciting, it dragged on way too long. Also, there was no reason to get them drunk. That ruined the whole show. The most interesting part of Lana and her students was left out. I mean the requirement that she now allow whatever the guys want.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Please where is the next part?

DomindiDomindialmost 2 years ago

For those asking when is the next part if you notice his timeline it's always a month or so apart. So I wouldn't expect anything before June 22nd

GSaintGSaintover 1 year ago

She helps all her needy students and is not afraid to help the 'uglier' or even fat guys. She seems to love being used by ALL the men.

Now she is Greg's school girlfriend (white lie). I think this is a development that no one saw coming. I really thought it was going to be BJ or Jim. I am not complaining because these guys are going to get their share. So it's good to include an outsider like that. Their second meeting is important because it shows that the meetings at school are continuing and that Greg is also corrupting and using Lana. 

Chloe is such a teaser and a good 'role model' for Lana. One day they should 'work' together and have a foursome with two guys (maybe Principal Bill and Janitor Kenny or Prof. Henry). Chloe is also very hot and a good character.

I'm looking forward to the action with the TTT trio. I wonder how much cum she will get on her tits? :-) 

My favourite encounter is with Principal Bill who is the best corruptor. Their meeting is longer than usual and I love longer encounters. Perfect!  He is patient and knows how to work Lana based on his long-term plan. He is very aware that Lana will take his bait. Finally, she will wear nice dresses, hot uniforms and fancy underwear. This is important for me! I hope that one day she will buy her own provocative lingerie. Bill really should be her sexual mentor!!

Last but not least the evening with Jack and Lilly! I also like this long event, but for me the alcoholic factor (slurring) was a bit too much. No real criticism here because I understand your intent and it doesn't work without drinks at that moment. I would have liked to "see" the more intimidating pictures, but that would have been too much for Dennis and the story. He doesn't need to know all the corruption, seduction and cheating of his future wife. 

It was very hot that she doesn't consider her fiancé for anal sex. Lana tells herself that it's "below Dennis' standards", but I think deep down she knows Dennis won't get the job done. 

That is your tenth chapter, but it feels like the third or fourth. This is soo much entertainment! Well done!! 

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Kudos to PH for creating such an exciting story. This story should be made into a movie series. It's more erotic

than the famous Emmanuelle films, Nymphomaniac, and Alice in Wonderland. Regarding Ch. 10, I loved

her interaction with Greg and the bullies. Now that Lana is Greg's school girlfriend who can predict how far

their relationship will go especially with the pressure from the bullies. The principal Bill is working on Lana and

the Professor screwed up his plan. Next time Lana visits Principal Bill, she will be wearing the new sexy uniform and that

may be the time to kick things off. She gets hot very easily and the other characters in the story love her response.

I read up to Ch. 12A and can't wait for more...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Who are the School Board members and will they get a chance to meet Lana individually? Sounds like a possible

side story with some sex? Love Lana's character.

Master_DoctorMaster_Doctorabout 1 month ago

I had really hopes that Stockings would have been a part of her new Uniform. You mentioned them as part of the original School staff dress code in Chapter 1. But nothing after. Since she had to stop wearing Pantyhose/tights It was a logical next sexy option. Again no shoes LOL. still 5 stars

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Update: 04/24/24 * Good progress on Ch 14b of Naive Teacher * Will break it down into b and c, so I can get them out in a timely manner :) ~~~ * General Notes: Planning to go back to Ch1 and rewrite some dialogs and things like that. My style of writing changed a bit and I ...