All Comments on 'Naked Sara's Ch. 01: The Outlaws'

by MLG52

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marine55rickmarine55rickover 13 years ago
Very entertaining story...

... and somewhat different than most. I enjoyed it very much, esp the part were she encouraged the men to fuck her.

Ignore the idiot who could think of nothing else to say but criticize you for using "ah, ah, ah..." in your story. Some people are just simply morons.

I hope you will write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Interesting

I hope that Ch 2 and others follow. I usually don't like this type of story but this one is well written. I am very interested to see where the author takes the characters (the family) in this story. It could be very very dark or it could turn out lighter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More incest...

Write more incest stories man....

Jorgy444Jorgy444over 11 years ago
Ho Hum

Just your typical jerk-off story without much

imagination or quality. Gave you 3 stars.

409er409erover 1 year ago

Started off really good. Needs a bit more imagination

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