All Comments on 'Naked Sara's Ch. 01: The Outlaws'

Started off really good. Needs a bit more imagination

Just your typical jerk-off story without much

imagination or quality. Gave you 3 stars.

Write more incest stories man....

I hope that Ch 2 and others follow. I usually don't like this type of story but this one is well written. I am very interested to see where the author takes the characters (the family) in this story. It could be very very dark or it could turn out lighter.

... and somewhat different than most. I enjoyed it very much, esp the part were she encouraged the men to fuck her.

Ignore the idiot who could think of nothing else to say but criticize you for using "ah, ah, ah..." in your story. Some people are just simply morons.

I hope you will write more!