All Comments on 'Nancy's Descent Pt. 04'

Like the story line in all four chapters. THe subtle hints and words of encouragement to being a "Good Girl" keeps Nancy wanting more even when she rebels from time to time. Keep the story going, please.

Can’t wait for ch5!

Please keep writing! :)

Just bravo. Now why can’t I find a Nancy?

Thanks everyone for the great feedback, I'm so glad you're enjoying it. To Anonymous user "Bravo": I don't know...are you a Mr. Hoyden? Nancys need their Mr. Hoydens...;)

This story is so enticing! It hits all of my fantasies, and I love the slow burn. Watching the power play and seeing Nancy break is delightful. I wish I could live as Nancy, even just for a day, and experience Mr. Hoyden for myself.

This is my favorite story ever

I'm glad you're minimizing the super-hypnosis MC angle; this story now reads like a very well written, comparatively normal/realistic, D/s tale. FWIW I greatly prefer those sorts of stories to the magical wish fulfillment which generally typifies MC. (Actually, the only reason I noticed your work was because of the "reluctance" tag and the well deserved high ratings.) Also FWIW, let me suggest that at some point you try a completely normal & realistic "slow burn" D/s story - because I think you have the skill & knowledge to pull something like that off too. Five stars.

Please write more.....

This is a great start to your storytelling on literotica.

The slow submissiveness of Nancy is well crafted and very erotic.

Steve

Am enjoying this tale immensely I wish she delivered my laundry roll on pt.05

Hi Justine,

Your style is beyond wonderful! I want to commission a sequel.

How much do you need?

Very hot. When you use foray, do you mean foyer? Sometimes you use bare when you mean bear. Things like this have a way of pulling a reader out of the enjoyment, even if just momentarily.

I hope there is a Mr Hoyden out there to take advantage and humiliate me this way.