All Comments on 'Nastya and Melissa'

A few suggestions. First, learn the English language. Second, this belongs in either the Lesbian category or non/consentual.

Hmmm. The black guy dominating the white woman must be running thin these days. I've noticed several black woman dominating white women stories lately. All as poorly written, fucked up racist shit as the others.

Trash. So much wrong here

Please more of those black femdom stories so good

First this story (or chapter) was way to short and things happen to quick for this type of story. Take your time do a little more of a set up and take your time telling what each person is thinking and how they feel. Black dominate over white lesbian stories are hard to write, so put the time in and you will get those 5 stars that you want. I gave this one 4 stars because it was your first but the content and speed really only deserved 3 stars. thank for sharing and don't give up. do a second chapter and show what you can do with these characters.

Pappasleaze!

I kept thinking why this story seems so familiar to me, and then I found it it was written in 2016-2018 and it looks like a translation

This is the translation. I wrote this story first in Russian, but now I decided to post it here. I'm sorry if my English is not good enough.

This is the translation. I wrote this story first in Russian, but now I decided to post it here. I'm sorry if my English is not good enough.

Wow just loved it.