All Comments on 'Natasha, Emily, and Me Ch. 03'

Sorry.

Exposition is NOT an outdated idea.

Dropping the reader into the middle of a story is not "revolutionary" or "cool" or "innovative".

At least not the hamhanded way you did it.

This may be the stupidest story of all time

Where are the tags ? A tale hiding the tags is a sign of disrespect to the readers and its evaluation is compromised from the start.

rather liked it.

The other commentators seem... crotchety.

I liked the slow and motivated way the author introduced exercise to the life of the protagonist. Since I have been trying to work myself up to starting a exercise program, I found all of it ... inspirational.

I have known many older couples that exercise - my 2nd step grandfather was running the neighborhood in his 70's.

And almost spontaneous orgasms in women? I can see it - particularly with the emotional background hinted in the story.

I am motivated to read the others in this series.

Green-something

Anything Harryin VA thinks is stupid or bad obviously has some redeeming value

Yeah, I liked that! Nice easy going story of turning life around a getting back on track! With a little help from your friends of course!

Pretty much anything Ic69hunter thinks is good has no redeeming value.

Beautiful story of multiple love