All Comments on 'Nathalie's Makeover Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

time to bail and get out of there

sissyjolie4usissyjolie4uover 4 years ago

is this the beginning of a sissy cuckold?

fuglyscarecrowfuglyscarecrowover 4 years ago

What a horrible story this has become, i really thought that nathan would see through his wife and see the true person she has become. I have given up on this story now as reading a story filled with cruel people just isn't my thing.

red_woodred_woodover 4 years ago
Get a Clue

Nice development, and read.

Think Nathan will get hint of his position in the triangle when he sees them 'HI FIVE' in the mirror reflection after receiving Yves gift or after he is tightly locked up to keep him from Viv's charms while Yves in France?

Red_wood

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Bad turn

Went from a decent story to rape.

That is never a good turn.

Not sure why so many good stories always feel the need to make him gay.

Playing dress up with his is not going to suddenly turn him on to men.

Your story and that's fine. It just lost all of its believability to me.ih

buelbuel13buelbuel13over 4 years ago
turning up speed

interesting development! keep that going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

i knew you would take all his dignity and make him take a cock in his ass well as suck yves off time for the poor bastard to pack his bags and find another city to live in leave the slut to have yves to herself that is what she wants he doesn't need any more humiliation than she has already done to him she is a world class bitch time to go don't be a bitch writer let him get some revenge on the two of them he loves to dress for her but doesn't need to be humiliated by her

saccadesaccadeover 4 years ago
Evil women

All your stories feature controlling woman who bully and manipulate the protagonist into turning gay, I'm all for someone finding themselves but hate the way their partners push then into it because they have some fantasy. Please let this character grow a backbone!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More.... fuck more

He so wants it..... i have been there with my wife... both of us dressed up to turn him on.. sharing his cock then both enjoying being fucked by him... watching him fuck my wife with his huge hard cock made me cum as much as they did.

centralsquareguycentralsquareguyover 4 years ago
When are you going to tell us your story...

Cagivagurl?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
When is the next chapter?

Been checking daily for the next chapter. When will it be posted?

robin48robin48over 4 years ago
surrender

letting his inner girl out...

BrendaNWBrendaNWabout 4 years ago
Loving it !

I am totally enjoying the story of Vivian and Nathalie, and see a lot on Nathalie in myself .. I am very curious about guys and think I would have jumped in more than Nathalie/ Nathan has .. I feel myself drawn into his life with a loving woman, me as her wife and a fun guy friend for us both !! Anxious to see how their adventure continues .. TG Tiffany

SissyTaraSissyTaraabout 4 years ago
Wow

Great story. Super hot sex. I want Yvette to fuck me! Can’t wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The main character is a moron, no one is that stupid..This guy has literally got no brains at all. A fart has more intelligence. He deserves to be a cuckold sissy fuck toy of a fat french pig along with his skanky cheating slut wife. How can she be blamed for anything when her husband is so stupid he allows every opportunity possible for another guy to fuck his wife and him..only a nit wit would ever get into such a situation. Characters like this remind me of something a friend once told me.. "No one has ever lost money underestimating the public.!!!"

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 2 years ago

Awesome sotry-telling!

Nathan/atilie is stuck in his preconceptions. Sadly, so is Viv. Yves, well, probably is a narcissist, but seems confident that everyone will have fun his way.

Because Nath can't/won't get over himself, and because Viv can't see that he is Not where she thinks he is... yeah, that relationship is about toast.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanalmost 2 years ago

I guess I can understand his conflicted emotions but both of them are just using him, both are predators which to me is 1 step below a rapist.

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