All Comments on 'Nathalie's Makeover Ch. 08'

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darthnader19darthnader19over 4 years ago

The ending Felt a little rushed but overall loved the story . Can't wait for your next work <3

curricdcurricdover 4 years ago
The best ending.....

This story turned out better than I could have imagined. Nathan/Natalie grew a backbone had stood upright for his/herself and everything turned out for the best. Nathan/Natalie was coerced, raped, and sexually assaulted by Yves. It was difficult for the other characters in the story to understand this. If a person is coerced to have sex it is still rape and assault. Yves used use personal charisma to overpower others and to get them to do what he wanted them to do and he justified it by saying that they enjoyed it and would like more of the same.

I am glad that our hero/heroine stood by their principles and was truly a respectful and happy ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Sorry to see it end

Loved the story. Yves needed to have his knees broken, but it was great.

BrendaNWBrendaNWabout 4 years ago
Pretty good ending

I liked the overall story and the ending was nice. I would have liked Nathalie to have gotten over being jealous of Viv with Carol and the three live together in mutual love ❤️ Thanks for the wonderful story and I can accept the ending but think Nathalie has some growing and maturing to do to reduce future problems. TG Tiffany

SissyTaraSissyTaraabout 4 years ago
Great series

This was truly an excellent well written series. The later chapters are not as hot as the early ones but, the story is so excellent it was still fun to read. My only complaint was that after Natalie found how good cock could be why she was never interested in anyone else who had one. My first time had the opposite effect on me and after admitting I was bi and a sissy I wanted to have lots of men and gurls.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nathalie Series

This has been a totally awesome series of stories, extremely well written and an exceptionally hot story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great!

I was so repulsed by Yves. I was so bothered by him and hated Nath letting him get his way that I deleted the story from my computer in chapter 2. But, I was hooked and couldn't let it go so I looked the story back up and finished. It is a very good read and really draws the reader in. I'm so happy I finished as the ending is what I hoped. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
unbelievable

great story, shows how strong sex can control.

kiwianne12kiwianne12over 2 years ago

Good to see the guy/girl win in the end.

I almost kicked this story half way through but glad I stayed until the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Just terrible. Nothing but a clusterfuck. One star ⭐️ for this shit,

CindyTVCindyTVover 2 years ago

Loved it! From beginning t end it was a fun journey. I wanted to be Nathalie all throughout this story. - Cindy

darthnader19darthnader19over 2 years ago

Still brilliant on the 3rd read through. 5⭐

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Maybe its the Big Les in me but I would have loved it as a threeway family at the end...LOL

Still at least the pig ended up alone..Yay LOL

Veronica_E_DayVeronica_E_Dayover 2 years ago

Wonderful story that I enjoyed very much with a lovely ending. Five Stars.

Kathryn65Kathryn65about 2 years ago

Loved reading this through again, such an interesting story from start to finish. That French div should have gone to jail.🤬🤬

Pat80Pat80about 2 years ago

I've really enjoyed this story. I wish the punctuation had been better and you need to distinguish similar sounding words like "past " and passed, but so does everyone else I guess.

I envy you; I have not your wonderful imagination.

More please.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanalmost 2 years ago

I rarely read stories(CD) like this but I read all parts of this. Still can't understand why he didn't just move far away, especially when he got the big job bonus, payout. Seems like everyone is pushing him to do something he doesn't want to.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I just fucking loved it.

I am a CD and I get so into the characters and imagine it's me.

While sometimes your storylines annoy the crap out me, I just can't stop reading them

All I want is for my wife to fully support my inner female and allow me to be her girlfriend as well as her husband.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I was so conflicted reading this because Nathalie's New World was such a flop and unfinished. Nathalie's Makeover however was amazing.

Lapper69Lapper69about 1 year ago

Great story, glad that Yves finally got put away and Viv is over him. Hope there might be more.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Great story, loved the arc and the ending. Great job!

The_Winter_WitchThe_Winter_Witch6 months ago

nice story, problem with guys who think they are gifts to both men and women most of them are pricks

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