by Cagivagurl
The ending Felt a little rushed but overall loved the story . Can't wait for your next work <3
This story turned out better than I could have imagined. Nathan/Natalie grew a backbone had stood upright for his/herself and everything turned out for the best. Nathan/Natalie was coerced, raped, and sexually assaulted by Yves. It was difficult for the other characters in the story to understand this. If a person is coerced to have sex it is still rape and assault. Yves used use personal charisma to overpower others and to get them to do what he wanted them to do and he justified it by saying that they enjoyed it and would like more of the same.
I am glad that our hero/heroine stood by their principles and was truly a respectful and happy ending.
Loved the story. Yves needed to have his knees broken, but it was great.
I liked the overall story and the ending was nice. I would have liked Nathalie to have gotten over being jealous of Viv with Carol and the three live together in mutual love ❤️ Thanks for the wonderful story and I can accept the ending but think Nathalie has some growing and maturing to do to reduce future problems. TG Tiffany
This was truly an excellent well written series. The later chapters are not as hot as the early ones but, the story is so excellent it was still fun to read. My only complaint was that after Natalie found how good cock could be why she was never interested in anyone else who had one. My first time had the opposite effect on me and after admitting I was bi and a sissy I wanted to have lots of men and gurls.
This has been a totally awesome series of stories, extremely well written and an exceptionally hot story.
I was so repulsed by Yves. I was so bothered by him and hated Nath letting him get his way that I deleted the story from my computer in chapter 2. But, I was hooked and couldn't let it go so I looked the story back up and finished. It is a very good read and really draws the reader in. I'm so happy I finished as the ending is what I hoped. Thank you for sharing.
Good to see the guy/girl win in the end.
I almost kicked this story half way through but glad I stayed until the end.
Loved it! From beginning t end it was a fun journey. I wanted to be Nathalie all throughout this story. - Cindy
Maybe its the Big Les in me but I would have loved it as a threeway family at the end...LOL
Still at least the pig ended up alone..Yay LOL
Wonderful story that I enjoyed very much with a lovely ending. Five Stars.
Loved reading this through again, such an interesting story from start to finish. That French div should have gone to jail.🤬🤬
I've really enjoyed this story. I wish the punctuation had been better and you need to distinguish similar sounding words like "past " and passed, but so does everyone else I guess.
I envy you; I have not your wonderful imagination.
More please.
I rarely read stories(CD) like this but I read all parts of this. Still can't understand why he didn't just move far away, especially when he got the big job bonus, payout. Seems like everyone is pushing him to do something he doesn't want to.
I just fucking loved it.
I am a CD and I get so into the characters and imagine it's me.
While sometimes your storylines annoy the crap out me, I just can't stop reading them
All I want is for my wife to fully support my inner female and allow me to be her girlfriend as well as her husband.
I was so conflicted reading this because Nathalie's New World was such a flop and unfinished. Nathalie's Makeover however was amazing.
Great story, glad that Yves finally got put away and Viv is over him. Hope there might be more.
nice story, problem with guys who think they are gifts to both men and women most of them are pricks