All Comments on 'Natural Erections Ch. 04 - Hariyati'

The ritual tying and “scarification.” Perfect!

The ease with which Mike and Paulo became more than friends. And of course Mr. Jessup and the hunted at relationship with Simon must be explored. It is a perfectly masculine set of scenes that had me hard and stroking immediately.

The watersporting was introduced at the right moment and built so well. I loved how the exchange of semen between the men was orchestrated.

Last the hint of Hariyati being forced gave the story immediate anxiety which resolved into arousal. So nicely done. Only a writer can do that.

One if your very best stories and they are Legion!

Nice triple play, perhaps a triple header, the rope tie was priceless of course the chapter is a trifecta of outdoor play. I'm not sure if I will have the lemonade.