All Comments on 'Naughty at Work'

by PinkBunnyWriter

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting premise.

But, among other things, much too short.

At least there should have been some discussion about exactly what Claire had done to/with her last night that was so wonderful. Or maybe some suggestions about what would be in store for her tonight when she got home.

Three stars.

Master_DoctorMaster_Doctorover 1 year ago

Your concept was good, but you should really have someone proof read and edit your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

LOVED IT, because I can relate to being that board at work and doing things people can't know anything about. What I loved most was the details about her use of her toy and the adjustments she had to make to get away with it and increase her pleasure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I loved it. 5 stars. we need more to see the revenge and the back and forth games between the two.

Pappasleaze!

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