by PinkBunnyWriter
Interesting premise.
But, among other things, much too short.
At least there should have been some discussion about exactly what Claire had done to/with her last night that was so wonderful. Or maybe some suggestions about what would be in store for her tonight when she got home.
Three stars.
Your concept was good, but you should really have someone proof read and edit your work.
LOVED IT, because I can relate to being that board at work and doing things people can't know anything about. What I loved most was the details about her use of her toy and the adjustments she had to make to get away with it and increase her pleasure.
I loved it. 5 stars. we need more to see the revenge and the back and forth games between the two.
Pappasleaze!