All Comments on 'Naughty School Girl'

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jsmangisjsmangisabout 6 years ago
Excellent First Story!

Well done. This is a great first effort. I hope we see more from you in the future.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 6 years ago
great story

however, it went a little too fast, slow down and make it last two pages but no more and make it a seduction, not a quick fuck that she's already got rid of her bra and panties

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