All Comments on 'Neighbors Ch. 23'

So good...

Brilliant work

I’m conflicted, love this story so much so I don’t want it to change tact, but I can’t get passed the girls are missing out. They could have a much better time with his tongue. He could dress & groom them put their makeup on. Other than the money what enjoyment do the girls get? As always 5 stars.

Brilliant work as always, I love how you perfectly capture the fetish for cruelty, the idea that it will hurt and hurt and cause such damage and yet he loves every second of it!

Hottest chapter yet. I love how they all completely deny him in every way. Don't let him see them naked.

YES YES, less gay things and more of the girls using the cage programs please.

So fucking good!!! Love the vivid description of the no -sexual or semi sexual stuff. And love, love love how Claire got i to it and left him in cage mode outside their door. So cruel!!!! Where are these girls in real life?????

Glad to see you're back! I never give up hope :)

Fantastic as always! Thank you for sharing

The legend is back! Imagine my joy finding a new chapter today. Great stuff as always!

Incredible story, great writing.

Always excited for another chapter and always worth the wait.

This is definitely my favorite chapter yet! I can't wait to see where it goes next! I love the idea of him not just being cucked by Amber but also Claire!

By the time this story ends I'm gonna be 80 years old

Love this story! And here I am again.. checking every day.

But i'm so grateful that you're still here!!

Best femdom writer out there. Love the focus on 'unfairness' so hot.. Although if I had a choice, there wouldnt be so much cucking / Justin etc although I know some people are into it. Leep up the good work!

Love the story, but I keep wondering... whatever happened to Christy, the girl who hung out with Amber and Sarah when Chris just met them. Did the gang exchange the poor girl for Claire?

Love this story, every installment is great. I look forward to where it goes from here. Thankyou Betaboy for sharing with us.

I love your story

I will be honest with you, it's a fictional story anyways, but it seem a little unreal how Justin get with everything about Chris lifestyle. He mocked him, but he seems being ok to soon after each new thing he learns. Even for someone kinky, a straight dude seeing another dude in panties, normal reaction is run off the place. It's just some limits, there are other things that make the story unrealistic, but I will just add that the many parts of the story just look like random porn videos scenario, for exemple those part where Claire (who suppose to be shy) was bitting her lips for everyone to see that she's horny. Even if she was drunk or got along with the ambiance, it was too abrupt, especially her behavior during her strip show. And please, for God sake, keep those gay stuff away from the story🙏. You decide about the story, but I would suggest that at some point, you'll just get rid of Justin in the next chapter. That cuckold stuff begin to be cringe. And as a previous anon said why did you get rid of Christy. She's not in the team anymore. And you could've actually involve Amber's mom, I already imagine a scenario where she would've not be expected to be even more gorgeous than her daughter, and Chris will fall for her, but as Amber described, she's very disciplined, and would be even more strict than Amber and Sarah both, she would be single because Amber's dad couldn't bare her bossy attitude anymore, then Chris almost broken from his new lifestyle will get her attention even if not her love, after he pleaded his devotion and confessed his love to her, and you can go on anyway you want. Put more girls and trash the gay.

Love Claire's casual cruelty. pleeeease continue.

:( Still no update? :'(

Here are some suggestions:

1. Have the ladies force Chris give them his facebook, twittet, linkdin,... passwords. They can change the passwords and even edit security questions and backup email/phone numbers. Chris can stay logged in but the account owner of those sites would be Amber and her or Sarrah can upload exposing pictures of him in his own social media accounts if he doesn't work hard enough for them.

2. Force Chris to hire Claire as an overpaid intern so he can be teased and controlled even at work by her. Even though she's getting paid by Chris she in fact works for Amber, reporting to her and torturing Chris at work on het behalf.

3. Have Chris tatto things like "property of miss Amber" or "owned by mistress Sarrah" on his back, arms or stomache.

4. Force Chris to give a huge amont of money to Amber as a gift, then Amber can legally give it back to him with a really high interest rate. That way he would legally be in debt to Amber for the rest of his life. Even when Amber gets everything he has he'll have to work and make money for her not just because of the cage and the threat of pictures, but because he'll go to jail if he deosn't do so.

And less gay thinga please. Hope you go back to writing soon.

I enjoy the cuckold aspect so long as it doesn't turn into chris sucking dick or getting fucked in the ass. Amber is written as a promiscuous hot girl that loves big dick and humiliating Chris in that way is often hot and unfair to him.

Is it over? Is this the end? Will there be a chapter 24?

I like forcing Chris to wear panties in front of another guy. It's very humiliating for him. I also love having Chris see the girls oogle all over Justin in a sexual way while Chris is completely denied. I like exactly where the story is going.

CAn we expect a new installment? This is my fav story Ive read online! Pleeeease

Hottest story on here and we’ll written. Such a shame that it ended!

Hope you write again one day Betaboy